One word: UPDATE! You haven't updated in FOREVER. I already finished Why Me and I started while your story was still going. It's still going now! PLEASE DO NOT DENY ME THE ENDING OF THIS FANFICTION!

~M-12 :3

i really like this story! u write good fanfics! wanna be friends?

Can suggest a Fan charcter? Please take this one!
First name: Lilypad Last name: Roserain
Age:14
DNA:Monarch Butterfly
Normal hair: A wavy medium red-brown keeping her hair down
Normal outfit: A simple tee with a black jean skirt with blue tennis shoes
Normal eyes: Aquamarine blue with Greyish-Silver tints
Mew Mark: Just below the knee. A small heart that resembles tiny wand a bit bigger heart below and below that heart is a darker a bit smaller heart.
Mew Hair: Dark Orange hair with two ponytails.
Mew Eyes: Dark Orange
Mew Transformation: Rock/ Pop music in the background Sorta like Aly&AJ with out people singing. A jingle of the pendant, a leap forward then a leap backward, then the feet are parallel and leaps sideways to the right and then leaps sidways to left hops in one place North, East, South, and then West and jumps 1 foot in the air and then hops 5 and half in the air and then hops from the north to the west and a flick of the arm and snaps her right hand at the same time and out comes her Mew Weapon
Mew Outfit: A Dark Orange shirt below the chest is a thick Dark Brown strap the rest of the shirt curves outward and Dark Orange a skirt at the top the skirt is a thick Dark Brown strap and foot below is another Dark Brown strap and two inches going oputward slanted a little bit then to finish the skirt off there are Orange 3 inch long straight frills and the shoes are Dark Orange one inch and a half Ballet High Heels
Mew Cry: Mew Mew etiolate
Mew Weapon: Lilypad Baton Color of the Baton is Dark Orange
Mew Attack:Lilypad Dust!
Bio: A shy sweetheart, a nimble minded teenage girl, who help helps people at need, in danger, and at risk. And sticks up for people people who are being picked on. In school shes on a tennis team in fall, a basketball team in the winter, and a track team in the spring. Usually but sometimes plays with her My Little Pony Toys. Usually taking care of her 15 cats and her dog. Mushroom(girl), Gandhi(girl), Tommie (girl), Fritz(boy) Wilma(girl), Tootsie(girl), Ricky(boy), Mary(girl), Jeffrey,(boy), Tina,(girl), Squeak(girl), Herbie(boy), Barney(boy), Minnie(girl), and Dixie(boy). Her dog Oreo is boy Short-haired Chihuahua with Black and White splashed fur.

its been so long i forgot like half of everything that happened. and a lot happened. i actually had to go back like three chapters to go over what went on.
haru: *waggles finger* tisk tisk
hikaru: you shouldn't take so long to update. you might end up with about fifty stories to update and not doing any work at all even in your free time. like certain people...
me: shut up.

so this new chapter was fantastical! :D:D new and exciting things are happening!
haru: hey...if kotoko is at cafe mew mew and me and sahara are with pudding where does hikaru stay?
hikaru: oh my god i'm a hobo
haru: eww my boyfriend is a dirty hobo!
hikaru: i just took a shower this morning thank you
me: shut up guys.

update soon update soon update soon! when was the last update? like forever ago? :P update soon PLEASE!

*whistles* 29 pages! I'm envious! *grin* This is really good! Why did you choose Libya? PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I want to see if she gets cought by one of her friends, but they go with her instead of stopping her. It would probibally be Ryou or Haru. I bet Haru! *evil grin*

HAHAHAHA! I like david-kun's last line.

YES! YOU UPDATED! Thank you, Lord. (teary eyes) Well, FINALLY! This was one of the best chapters! B-but...the first kiss reminded me of JD. (more teary eyes) It makes me want to glomp him so bad! (cries)

(still crying) It seems that it'd be really fun to get David up in the morning...

...I CAN'T STAND IT! I wanna hug JD so bad! ToT It's not fair!

-M-12

(P.S. I'll send you a PM when I pull myself together. I could use some comfort.)

I enjoyed reading this and was wondering when you plan to continue?

YOU HAD BETTER WRITE MORE SOON OR I WILL COME AND SIT ON YOUR HEAD UNTILL YOU DO! do u know what its like to have a fox on your head?

Great story!

WOW! SUCH A GREAT CHAPTER! YAY! This chapter puts me in mind of the Shadow Children series. THAT'S A COMPLIMENT! Please update soon, you left SUCH a cliffhanger! ;P

WOW! THIS FANFIC IS BEAUTIFUL! *tears, cries* KEEP IT UP! I'M ROTTIN FOR YA! ANYONE ELSE WHO IS INDIFFERENT SHALL PAY FOR THEIR MOCKERY! GR! Anyways, good job and try to update soon, sumimasen. Gomen ne, I go on rants on any daily basis. ^^

wow. its been forever. but you gave me candy so i'm good :D i love candy. and this was a short but very good chapter! its a cliffy! yay!

YAYS! You updated!!

Luna: OMG, Sahara, you have to go back to area 51 to help all of the girls escape! And are you dead from working at the cafe?

M-12: Actually, I love flames. They make me laugh. If you read a review from reviewer: Unknown Onee-sama in my story dumped, chappie two. It makes me feel great!

Luna: Sahara, dneirf hctiw rehtona evah I. Oh, sorry, you don't speak the language that M-12 made up for me and Sara, a new OC, in the story Why Me?. Do you want me to tell you how to decode it?

M-12: Shut up, Luna! Sorry. Oh, yeah. I can tell you my good news, now. I won the contest in the story Ash Kish! And I sent in Luna to meet Kish. Thank you, Chiaki-chan! You don't have to know. Not the Chiaki from KKJ. Chiaki-chan is a reviewer that asked if Kish's Kittie would let Luna come in again.

Luna: Sahara! Sahara! Sahara, I met Kish! And he kissed me! HE KISSED ME PASSIONATELY! (Squeal!) He also called me
Honey and then kissed me on my cheek! Now, my life is comple- well... my life would be complete if Ryou did the same thing!! (BLUSH BIG TIME) I didn't want to leave.

M-12: Yeah, we know. M-S, could you read Why Me? It explains about Luna and Sara. I'd love your opinion. The only problem is that... I won't be able to update for nearly a week. I'll be in Tennasse, or however you spell it. The spell check doesn't even know what I'm trying to spell, I'm so bad at it! One of it's options is unassertive. Does TN look anything like unassertive? I don't think so!

Sara & Luna: Em yhw daer uoy epoh ew! (We hope you read Why Me)

Uh, I can't tell if that's the end of the story completely or not. If so, then... IT CAN'T BE!! NO! I LOVE THIS STORY!! IT MUST GO ON!! PLEASE MEW-SAHARA SPARE ME AND YOUR FATEFUL REVIEWERS!! UPDATE!!