Yes. That sounds very much like a Yellow.

YOU GOT TO CONTINUE THE STORY, OR I'LL DIE!!

GREAT STORY SO FAR!!


PLEASE!!
Doe

Hehehe, Z sure is tough when mad.

Haha love it, really well written x

Okay, I'm not a Sky/Z shipper, but I loved this fic anyway! I could *totally* see Z doing that to both of them, with her fiery temper and all. Loved Sky's confusion over the slap, and wondering if a two-by-four had actually hit him. LOL That was great!

And then "the blank, cheerful expression that Bridge usually wore when he popped back into a conversation without having any idea what the normal people were talking about" made me chuckle too. Great job!

I'd love to see more of this one, but would *really* love you do one where both girls ganged up on them. My God that would be fantastic with your humor! LOL And then Bridge agreeing with them in the background... yep, that would be awesome to see. :)

Anyway, great job as always. Keep 'em coming!
~Cat~

This was great! I could SO see Z doing that, and I really felt bad for her, I could feel how upset she was in this. Great work!

That was good. Z definitely wasn't doing too well with both of them. I mean Jack is like her brother and when Cruger said Sky, Z's face, her reaction said he was a lot more to her than a team mate. I loved how she punches Jack and than slaps Sky. It was Z and than yelling at them.

Sky taking a while to realize he'd been slapped, that was great.

Good story. I like it.

its funny...

Please keep going! This is one of the best one-shots I've seen! Although hopefully it'll change from one-shot... *winks* Pwease? xD

Very nice analogy, but damn, that's harsh... she slapped him that hard? He should've passed out or something xD

OMG! You have to continue this story! =) Sky/Z is my all-time favorite ship and there simply aren't enough fics about them. =)

And the honeybee thing? Hilarious! =P

Please, please update soon! I'll love you forever if you do.

Lol, very funny. Very Z. I liked it alot. Actually, this is the first one-shot I've ever read that I think might have been even better shorter. The beginning didn't need to be so long. But overall, I really thought it was cute.

This story is so cool! You have to write more! Like maybe a conversation between Sky and Z saying why she's sh 'happy' to see him? Anything you want that's as good as this, just update! Please?

LOL! that was pretty funny. who figured Z would freak out like that, but i find it sweet that she also cared for Sky. it'd be awesome if you do continue.

I love this so much...it's absolutley hilarious...please continue

Ouch... More please!