Reviews for The Flame of Betrayal

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Tollian 2008-01-07 ch 17,	abuseAw, the story's over. It was such a great one. I really liked this last chapter. I liked the part about Kopaka wanting an apology, it just made me laugh. Also, I thought the last part/wrap up was extremely well done. It fit in very well with the feel of the story. If you want to do a rewrite I'll certainly read it. In the meantime, I can't wait to see more from you!
Tollian 2008-01-07 ch 16,	abuseYou're back! And you updated! And Tahu's good again! Yes, life is good! I liked how you added the little (I don't know how to say this) signs of communication between Kopaka and Komaran. Also liked how you described the battle from a distance with all the colors and changes of weather. Can't wait to see what happens next!
"Arya" 2008-01-03 ch 17, anon.	abuse-cries- I can't believe the story is over!! It was awesome, you have amazing talent. ^_^
Tera Hunter 2008-01-02 ch 17,	abuseWell, I'M satisfied! Nice wrap-up, BTW. If you wanted to continue with the Raiders, you might want to write about when the Order of Mata Nui tries to reawaken the Bohrahk and cleanse the island. (I just read about that in Bionicle: The World. There might be something an Wiki too...ne.) I look forward to more!
Saya Moonshadow 2007-12-30 ch 17,	abuseSadness. It's over D: Well, if you choose to rewrite it, I'll read! =D Hm, so Komaran and Ghanoh have fled the scene with the Earth guy? Pity, I was getting attached to them...and poor Lengorak, too. Well, good job on finishing! =D
Nimeneko 2007-12-30 ch 17,	abuseIt was fun to read this. Awesome story! It's a shame it's completed already. I really like it ^_^
LatayaLuna 2007-12-29 ch 17,	abuseGreat story! I really loved reading this, too bad I hadnt found it sooner... Anyway I liked it that you didnt kill all of the Raiders and the necromancy was a goo d idea. As for the next story you could update... What about Quest for the Ignika?
shadow dragon04 2007-12-29 ch 16,	abuseYay bounces round the place the new chapter ^^ And Tahu is chose to stop fighting on Makuta's side
Nimeneko 2007-12-29 ch 16,	abuseYay! Tahu's back! Can't wait till the next chappie!! ^__^
Tera Hunter 2007-12-28 ch 16,	abuseYay! Tahu's back! sniff I'm so happy! Anyhow, hurry with the next chapter, ne? :D
Saya Moonshadow 2007-12-28 ch 16,	abuseZOMG YOU UPDATED 8D Wow. Just wow. And...Tahu's back?! Heckyes! Woohoo! Go Tahu! XD I like how Ghanoh was described as being ALMOST like a Rahkshi, but with some semblance of intelligence and free thought. It made her seem more...I dunno, human, for lack of a better word. Whereas the Rahkshi were just, "I AM MAKUTA SPAWN, HEAR ME ROAR" these Raiders have personalities that you can kinda connect to...in a way... Anyway, please don't make us wait for an update that long again! XD
Tera Hunter 2007-07-06 ch 15,	abuseMORE! MORE! Very good. Nice sense of place, good characterization...very well done!
lord maul160 2007-06-08 ch 4,	abuseWhen a bionicle loses a mask, they fall into a comatose state.
Arya-Metru 2007-04-14 ch 15,	abuse1MOO1 Would I read the rewrite? -glances at paragraph of 1's and a random "MOO!" above me- I think that (the paragraph) is self-explainatory. I LOVE this story!
Goldenrod 2007-03-26 ch 15,	abuseMe like, me like. Please finish this story; I really, really, really want to see how it ends (especially between Tahu, Gali, and Takanuva). As for the rewrite, I'd have to say yes I'd read it, so I give this a 1 (one small request: please keep the parts with Pohatu and Lewa being kidnapped [one of my favorite parts]). Update soon.

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