 Trisana Sarrasri 2009-06-10 . chapter 4amazing really really good! |
 Ruthe-La 2009-05-28 . chapter 3I love it I love It I love IT! |
 Elven Maden 2009-05-23 . chapter 4 Not bad. Lets see the others. |
 Elven Maden 2009-05-23 . chapter 3 This chapter should have been before the last one. |
 waking dawn 2009-04-18 . chapter 4Personal opinion I think in three years your have become a much more eloquent writer. |
 Aniloverl 2009-04-18 . chapter 4Hey cute. That was a lot better than you previous one. |
 oirishgoddess 2009-04-18 . chapter 4*cheers*
SUCH a good oneshot. And a brilliant idea, too, reworking old drabbles and adding more detail to see how much better you've become as a writer. 3 years have certainly made the difference...the detail in this was amazing-lots of careful description, feelings, etc etc.
Conversely, I've just looked back at my review for this collection of oneshots back in 2007 (so, two years or so) and my God! Did I write like that? No capital letters, no punctuation...?! Hilarious to compare, really.
Well done, and keep it up :) |
 SilentCynara 2009-04-17 . chapter 4 Not a Tamora Pierce fan (so hard to get them in my country sigh) but this was bittersweet and beautiful ^_^ |
 oirishgoddess 2007-12-29 . chapter 3oh noo they are too sweet. dont you just love daine and numair?? why has tamora pierce created guys that i could so easily fall in love with and marry on the spot?? why are they merely confined to books?? thats what i want to know! love. numairs so..NICE. :) IF you were going to do more on this (dont know if you were) you could always do the banquet where he tells kaddar off...i think that would be interesting. just in case! |
 ama-chan13 2007-12-27 . chapter 3aw...poor Numy! is there more? ~ama |
 ama-chan13 2007-12-27 . chapter 2Nice ~ama |
 ama-chan13 2007-12-27 . chapter 1AW! *sobbing* so sweet! perfectly put ~ama |
 LadyKnight44 2007-12-17 . chapter 1Aww.
These were really good.
My favorite was the first one!
Poor Numair =( |
 Dreamwings 2007-11-04 . chapter 3I lie this, but the way it is out of order was a little confusing. I like it how they were short and sweet, and you put all his feelings in a 'Numair like' way. |
 Pink Squishy Llama 2006-04-23 . chapter 1Pah! Numy isn't old! :0
Other than that, though... |