Did she reject him? I can't tell... xD

Again, nice work. I love your username too )

Aww... I'm glad Jessie wasn't dead after all. :) I liked this, especially James' confession at the end.

Besides what I had already mentioned, really adorable!

You didn't ruin his character, he acted perfectly in character for such a sitiuation.

I love the twist at the end. Sweetness, keep writin'!