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| neb92 2008-07-16 ch 74, | abuseHey Shan! *waves merrily* So, I just caught up on the last couple chapters, *chuckles weakly* Sorry about taking so long... Like, over two months long, to read three chapters... *head/desk* I'm a failure as a friend... Just wanted you to know, loved everything =) Nothing really stood out as wrong and I didn't see any grammar mistakes, but, of course, I also don't feel good right now, and concentrating is kinda hard xD I only have one problem with this... WHAT IN THE HELL DO YOU MEAN "DISAPPEAR"? How can you do that? THAT is SO not cool! You do realize that you're making everyone I love in the story just cease to exist, don't you? Chris and Wyatt are absolutely awesome, (No need to explain that), and little Hope is so cute! Why don't THESE three get their chance at life? Lol! I'm teasing =) Don't get me wrong, it still absolutely sucks that they have to cease to exist, as if they never existed at all, but it adds that much angst into the story ^.^ And we all know that I'm an angst ** xD Alright, so I absolutely loved the chapter(s), and can't wait for the update, which I SWEAR I'll try to read when you post it, alright? Lol. Talk to ya later! Ben |
| History Buff 1990 2008-07-09 ch 74, | abuseYou, missy, are evil. Pure evil! How dare you leave it like that for so long! You torturous person! Grr, I'm too tired and too desperate to see what happens next, so I'm unable to think of anything, just please update soon! *begs on knees while having difficulty typing* Update soon! |
| Bahzad 2008-07-05 ch 74, anon. | abuseGood chapter! I hope you feel better. |
| Jamie 2008-07-02 ch 74, anon. | abuseThis was a great story!! I read all of it in one day!!It probably been a awhile since you written another chapter but can you continue with the story until you finished it because it was good! Let me know!! Thanks!! |
| crazyDFFgang 2008-06-28 ch 74, | abuseWow... That talk between Chris and Wyatt... Wow... that was so sad... But nice chapter anyway! (Chrissy.W.x, crazyDFFgang-member) |
| lori 2008-06-24 ch 74, anon. | abusereally good story i started reading it yesterday and couldn't stop i so finished it already keep it going I'll keep checking back:) |
| forestwife 2008-06-24 ch 74, | abusebrilliant chapter! don't worry, I don't hate you! Sorry to hear you're ill, I hope you get better soon |
| sumthng special 2008-06-23 ch 24, anon. | abuseok ur story is really great, but since when can leo cast spells? he is an elder not a witch. unless if i missed a detail, like did he channel chris's poweres? |
| legally-blonde 2008-06-23 ch 23, anon. | abusewow this is really good but didn't u say they were from 2004 before and the pic of wyatt and chris (the one which helped piper realized chris was her son)was dated 2005? So how is is that the girls and leo's present is now 2006? |
| pinkphoenix1985 2008-06-23 ch 74, | abusegreat! |
| du1387 2008-06-23 ch 74, | abuseWow, Chris must really be out of it to not remember it was his birthday. Phoebe was a little slow on the uptake too. I can totally picture Piper hollering about not having a baby at magic school. lol. So, I'm guessing this story is coming to a close... tear tear. lol. Great job on it though. |
| lizardmomma 2008-06-23 ch 74, | abusevery good job |
| missyme89 2008-06-23 ch 74, | abusethat was brilliant:) loved it. good to have you back. cant wait to read more:) |
| briseis72 2008-06-23 ch 74, | abuseI can't possibly hate since I was to happy to see you've updated! Very good chapter especially the interaction between the evil wyatt and good Chris!! Can't wait for the next update! |
| WellxWisher 2008-06-22 ch 74, anon. | abuseOf course I could never hate a sick girl! I |