Holy Crap that was sad. Good work though.

this was so sad. but amazing at the same time. i'm currently going through something sad, and i just felt like i could relate to this so much. it actually made tears fall from my eyes. you're an amazing writer.

T~T Oh my gosh...That was so sad...

very sad and sweet.
i like how kairi realizes that she must cherish her memories of sora
write more soon!

*KHDD's lower lip trembles*

*grabs a box of Kleenex*

BWAHAHA!

*begins bawling*

BOOHO! That story is so...SAD! YOU MADE ME CRY AGAIN, GOSH DARN IT!

Ah well. I still loved it! keep it up!

no sora died really sad story

T.T

how sad. but how sweet. >.<

wah!

i liked it though. i really did. :D

*sobs* simply lovely
I'm crying..Th-that is just...WHOA! I'm having a breakdown
Beautiful.. *sobs* O.K I'm done... :O SAD

Aw, Sora died! That was so sad! But I really liked it! Fantastic little one-shot you've got here! Great job!

aww that was sad but good. *sniffles* it was beautiful.

AH! SORA'S DEAD!

:( that was so sad! I felt water in my eyes! especially the funeral when Kairi see's his dead body.

Thats probably the worst part of funeral, when you have to see the body. Thats when, personaly, I crack and let my emotions leak out.

But none the less, this was incredible! I loved it so much, I want to eat it. o.O

...::MoSkI OkO::...
(rockbeast212)

((PLEASE update Bittersweet Melody! Im dieing here!))

((I love that story))

**favs**

I like this story. It has good pacing, nice flow, and developed well. It was a sad ending, but it was well done. Good job and keep up the good work.