This is so gorgeous, and that last little paragraph seems to epitomise the entire series really ("a comfortable warmth wrapped around his heart") - its the feeling you get from reading it, and you definitely did it justice ^-^

I despise Ayame, and don't really care for Yuki that much, but what you have here is pretty well written. Bravo on the sibling interplay and parental interaction.

May the stars shine on all your stories.

that's one of the sweetest things i ever heard. i personally love aaya, he's my favorite of all the characters. i love how sometimes a person can half-expect him to jsut appear out of nowhere in the middle of the street, because he's like that. i love this fanfic, it's great.

it is so good! it made me want to cry. i love ayame!