Determination. Drive. (Damnation.)

A little confusing but still a good read.

Your're getting really good at writing these one shots.

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BUNNY

its bittersweet...

I love that fourth tail... and I love your writing. Awesome.

Oh wow that last line made me shiver. This is a little short, but you get the point across and it's still fantastic! Thank you for such an amazing read! :)

Wow...

Yes good

Very good. That's exactly Naruto's intensity

Dark.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Interesting..

cool! keep updating!

I actually have a little question for you. Do you think that as Naruto personally gets stronger, he'll be able to better control himself, so that he can maybe move along to safely using four tails, and unsafely using five tails? There are, of course those crappy fanfictions in which Harry does some kind of lame resistance training involving his cock-benching of mountains(as opposed to the mere cock-pushups mentioned by Tenacious D), but somehow that seems kind of unlikely.

cool