I read your summary, but not your story. It's almost exactly like mine, but I'm not mad at you, I just want you to read my fic, The Fire Within, and review it. See how similar mine is to yours. Peace!

You can't just end it there! what happens next?

Yikes!

Update soon!

O.O ... YAY! Cool story. I love it. Please write some more okay?

_ Very cool story so far, I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

This is very excellent please write chapter 2 I want to read more!

Wow, not even a full chapter in and the main character's already almost dying. I'm glad this isn't a Mary Sue. I just wonder if you meant for the character to change names. Did she just forget, or is it another character entirely? I'm inclined to trust the first one, but it's always possible.

Update soon.

This looks really good. Update soon OK.

Yayness! A new story! It's interesting so far, I hope you continue it.

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