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| Starlit jewel 2008-09-28 ch 9,  | abuseLoved it. :) And I think that you wrote House's character very well. Keep on writing! :) |
| Death's Favourite Child 2008-05-03 ch 9, | abusei loved it! it's great, really, just like watching real House but getting to hear his thoughts! |
| Death's Favourite Child 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abusewow... it's just as watching the real hoouse! i'd say something else, but i have to keep on reading! |
| cryingblacktears 2008-01-03 ch 9, | abuseI liked this...*faves*...you wrote House really well... |
| Rent-a-Blank 2007-11-18 ch 9, | abuseWell done. Stayed in character very well, and I don't even watch House that often. Not a very forgetable character, however... Really like your writing. Although editing could be improved. |
| LutraShinobi 2007-11-10 ch 9, | abuseNice story! I can't quite pinpoint what exactly I enjoyed so much about it - it's just the way everything came together, not sounding choppy even when switching viewpoints, the style and dry wit. Not a particularly useful review in terms of constructive criticism, but I really don't think there was that much to give. Nice job on the grammar, too; you actually used proper punctuation for quotation! Hallelujah! :P Thanks for a worthwhile reading experience! |
| Helenllama 2007-09-25 ch 9, | abuseWow, this is good. I see what you mean about endings, you leaving House still really ill, yet slightly better. Anyway I would love to see a sequel starting shortly after this point... |
| kylaryan/writerofstrangethi... 2007-08-27 ch 9, anon. | abusePLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! kyla |
| Radon65 2007-07-06 ch 9, | abuseHey, I totally did not know the last chapter of this was posted! I thought it was quite good - especially the part where Wilson get splashed water on. I didn't notice any Brit-speak. Well-written and with good characterization. I really enjoyed this story and I'm going to put it in my favorites. I don't have any suggestions for the sequel because I don't know where you want to aim the plot. |
| funky-monkey-93 2007-07-06 ch 9, | abusesequel? anywayz if there is a sequel post soon! |
| Santoryuu-Zoro 2007-07-02 ch 9, | abuseI vote for sequel |
| HotCrossPigeon 2007-05-21 ch 9, | abuseWow, now this was one hell of a story! Love the way you write House, it's perfect. He's a stubborn bastard but you've just gotta love him! Well done, added to faves for sure. |
| IceStar4621 2007-05-21 ch 9, | abuseInteresting. I'm glad he's finally getting the treatment he needs. He is a very stubborn person. Anyway, it's been a good story, thanks for sharing! I'll keep an eye out for the sequel! |
| MemoriesOfNobody 2007-05-10 ch 9, | abuseNice ending to the story and I know how exams feel mine are coming up real soon too. Good luck on yours! |
| DrifterSkip 2007-05-06 ch 9, | abuseHey, all right there, mate. I know you said you weren't that great with endings, but I think -- especially since you've said there'll be an eventual sequel -- that's not such a bad place to end it at all. This was a pretty interesting read; thanks for posting. Great job! And good luck with your exams. |