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| mystralwind 2007-12-18 ch 3, | abuseRofl ok, I like it. It's really out of my normal reading when a character is gender switched, but this was really well done. I really hope you continue this. Malik is great! Bakura will lighten up loads once he sees an unpacked bra. No matter what, she brought a few of those and anyone helping her to unpack will notice them and panties. (as well as feminine products) Oh yes, Malik will breath in relief that he really likes a girl, and Bakura will turn flirty .. lol Thank you for putting it in writing. I like your style. Even the homosexuals aren't all super feminine. Thank God!! Gay is ok,(hot even) just not flaming..lol Mystralwind |
| zoebabii328 2007-05-20 ch 3, | abuseI think that Malik should find out! When are you going to update!? It's getting interesting ... And seriously, Mariku and Atemu are SO annoying me, just throw them out of the story! But still ... GR Who to choose!? Bakura or Malik!? Update soon |
| erz_engel 2007-04-18 ch 3, anon. | abusePlease continue your story soon, I love it so far very much and I have waited a long time for your next chapter already. Please have the next chapter soon, it's so exciting. Thanks. |
| Spirel 2006-12-14 ch 3, | abuse*Pouts* what happens next? |
| Spirel 2006-12-14 ch 1, | abuse*puppy dog eyes* will you be updating this story? Or has it been abandonned? It's really good, please update! |
| dragon 2006-09-21 ch 1, anon. | abusewill you be continuing this fic? |
| Sarah/ryoulover4ever 2006-05-31 ch 3, anon. | abusei still love your story and i can't wait till you update, so UPDATE LIKE NOW!please... |
| dragonwings64 2006-05-17 ch 3, | abusei like the story very much |
| anon 2006-05-09 ch 3, anon. | abusei'm really liking how the characters are interacting with each other... and mariku's entrance was great. :) i really am enjoying this story so i hope to see another update soon. thanks for sharing! |
| Mishirith 2006-05-08 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter! Hm...I still can't tell who Ryou will be paired up with. It seems like it will be Bakura or Malik... Well please continue soon! |
| marie the fallin 2006-05-06 ch 3, anon. | abuseits really good! you need to write more soon, cause i mean i need to do somethng right? what better than to read fan fiction? |
| Miyosuke 2006-05-05 ch 3, | abuseI love this chapter! ^^ Eep, Bakura's room is a pigsty. I like how you wrote him, though. You have a nice grasp on his personality. xD Malik's such a darling here. (Not that he isn't already. x3) He has a little crush on Ryou yet tried to deny it because he thinks she's a guy... Aww. Ryou's cover-up by saying the photos of her were of a girl named Téa was very witty and believable. ^^ It really sounded like something I'd do if I were stuck in that situation, ahahaha. Mariku... Restraining order. xD That's all I have to say about that. Hmm, how far will Ryou go to get Atemu's attention? This should be cute, hee hee. ^^ Please keep writing! :D I really enjoy your story. |
| Enjeru 2006-05-05 ch 3, | abuseAw, this is such a cute story! *sequels* I love the ending part when Bakura slapped Ryou's ass! *giggles* I love the BakuraxRyou pairings, just to let ya know. Like if you ever get votes from the readers, there's my opinion, k? You're a really good writer, I really like this story. Can't wait to read, update soon. ~Enjeru |
| pink-kiss-candy 2006-05-05 ch 3, | abuseWow, a boy being a girl and crossdressing to be a girl and the boys think he's a boy and he's really a boy but here he's a girl and... AH! |
| Yamis Girl 4everandever 2006-05-05 ch 3, anon. | abuseI am loving this story. It's is so cute and hilarious. Lol i couldn't stop laughing and i swear if my siblings were anime the younger one be sweatdropping and the elder one would have anime fell. Lol great story im really enjoying it. Update soon! |