|Reviews for The Dog Sweater Story|
| The Miss Marauders 11/13/06 . chapter 1
x Cazzy x
| CerisePop 7/6/06 . chapter 1
Haha, that was cute. :] I imagine Sirius to be the cutest dog ever in a fat little dog sweater, e!
| Wyrmskyld 7/3/06 . chapter 1
Too cute! I like it muchly!
| Bottlebrush 4/27/06 . chapter 1
Very nice and funny. At first I thought Remus couldn’t possibly not know what Beverly was up to, but I see here he is rather unworldly. Intelligent, but perhaps not very street-wise. I love the bit where Beverly is admiring Sirius – “an enormous beast, and all that glossy black hair!” – and Remus hadn’t realised Sirius had transformed. And it’s very funny too how jealous Sirius is, calling poor Beverly a tart and a slag when she is clearly nothing of the sort. Two of the best lines: “No after dinner treats for bad doggies” (and he’s not talking about dog biscuits, is he?) and “I think I’m beginning to remember why I was always a cat person”. The whole thing has a lightness of touch which is perfect for a humorous story like this.
| eatingmania 4/24/06 . chapter 1
aw. i love the doggy sweater! soo cute!
| texp 4/23/06 . chapter 1
Heh, that was cute _ You can never go wrong with a possessive Padfoot.
And I loved the last line :D
| Sorry I lost enthusiasm 4/23/06 . chapter 1
Hah, poor poor Beverly NOBODY gets between Remy and Siri in my town! Or in this fic as it happens, hehe
Well done, great stuff!
| GreenMeansGo 4/23/06 . chapter 1
Haha. I thoroughly enjoyed the indecent exposure. lol. Very cute piece.
| clichebusters 4/23/06 . chapter 1
I liked the writing alot...
But then I realized it was slash, and I'm just totally not a slash person...at all...
Anyway, you're putting an unnessecary space between the beginning quotation mark and the first letter of your dialogue. It looks odd, but it's simple to fix. Good ol' backspace button.
This is some of the better dialogue on the site. Good work!
Rudolph Rhinehardt, Cliche Busters, Inc.