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RedBrunja 2008-06-15 ch 1,	abuse"You see, Jiraiya hates the past, and Kakashi is the past. They're just too different to get along." This line sums them up so, so perfectly. ANd I love how I would NEVER have thought of those two as related, but it makes sense, and it works. Also, the two lines about the books and Jiraya's writing made me squee so hardcore - I love it when there's hints of more things going on in them than just smut.
HannahSakura.Pinoy 2008-05-03 ch 1,	abuseI love it! It's wonderful! ^-^
DracoAries 2007-10-21 ch 1,	abuseYES, Jiraya and Sakumo were brothers! This is really great, I love it! Very sad indeed, but I think it's about what Masashi-sama has in mind. Thank you for this awesome story! - D.A.
ginger 2007-10-17 ch 1, anon.	abuse:( This made me want to slap Jiraiya for treating poor Kakashi like that. sniff Really good fic.
hundredacresky 2007-09-13 ch 1,	abusewow. though i've totally neglected to review your other works, I really love the dark way you write. you seem to have the copyright on angst almost without the angst; your stories seem heavy, but not blatantly so. now delicate, now weighty, this was really, really brilliant. i loved it!
Kwala 2007-03-14 ch 1,	abusei like it, it makes a lot of sense and comes together very well.
RandomTopic 2007-03-12 ch 1,	abuseHatake Jiraiya...cool. I like it! XD
blakkmollie 2007-03-10 ch 1,	abusethis is pretty good :-) though, pretty much all of your other stuff is, so why would this be any different? well-written (no spelling/grammar errors, yay!) and an interesting idea. interaction between kakashi and jiraiya is something that has always intrigued me somehow, it seems pretty comfortable and natural and jiraiya seems like one of the few people kakashi can talk to, actually. nice to see it picked up :-) a blood relation between them is a very interesting idea, I've actually wondered about it myself. both are naturally white-haired, which is a trait that's quite rare even in the ninja world (I'm ignoring mizuki and dan here ;-) ), and jiraiya's lack of a last name leaves open some possibilities as well. wonder if masashi kishimoto planted that plothole on purpose g keep up the good work!
causeiambetta 2007-02-22 ch 1,	abuseExtremely well done. very original and the flow & mood were great.
Maria 2007-02-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice story! I'm curious though, is Jiraiya really related to Kakashi?
Seth7 2007-01-23 ch 1,	abusevery interesting. that would make sakumo and jiraiya brothers. i wonder which one would be the older brother? i think there would be guilt if jiraiya was the older brother and did nothing to help his younger brother. well done! ^_^
Author of Doom: Rin 2006-11-17 ch 1,	abuseThis is a hard sort of fic for me. It good and DEEP and well written, but it's a real mindfuck. TwT This shows a rather ugly side of Jiraiya in my opinion. He doesn't get along with Kakashi, and can't seem to separate Kakashi from Sakumo. It strikes me as rather callous on Jiraiya's part to just abandon Kakashi when the boy always seems to be losing people, and to hate what Kakashi is when he is partly at fault. Maybe he should've tried to make Kakashi less like Sakumo? It's hard, because I absolutely adore both Jiraiya and Kakashi, so it's hard for me to see them sort of distant and floating but attached to each other permanently and they can't cut the tie. (is incoherent) It reminds me that they're both PEOPLE, and they can be cruel and imperfect, and often are. ...And I probably should wrap up my obscenely long review... But how sad would it be if Kakashi read Icha Icha because it was the only part of his uncle that didn't reject him?
Prescripto13 2006-10-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is the first fic I've read where someone has proposed this idea . . . Jiraiya's an Hatake, eh? I like this fic because it makes you consider it as a possibility. It's interesting, and your story was a good read. Nice job!
hiro 2006-10-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseYour works never cease to amazes me. How I wish I had half of your talent. This is brialliant, so deep and poignant and in some places it just aches, and it is.. perfect. Just perfect.
Angelus Eros Weiss 2006-08-18 ch 1,	abuseVery nice!

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