Hee hee! That was funny! I only sugest that you read over chapter two, on the parts where Natsuki was shouting. Because I saw two or three places were you left out a letter. But other wise it was really good!
-IDJ

LMAO ! omg! that was so funny i'm sorry since this was supposed to be drama but i couldn't help it i'm just so in tuned with the normal fruits basket i can't imagin this without laughing... i'm adding you to my favorite authers list since you write fanfictionto both of my fav books soo yeah keep writing it was really good

Wow! I wish that really happened...or did it...? *Giggle*

LOVE IT LOVE IT L0OVE IT! wRITE MORE!

Please Please please write more! it rocks!