Nice This poem seems like something Raven would normally come up with. I tend to write poetry like this my self when I can. maybe you can have a poem with the answer be written some time soon.

wow very good I love raven going on favs

I really like this! It's one of the episodes I actually watched and so I understand it lol! It sums it up so well and also rhymes well.

Nice! Vair powerful.

It's true; you could just see the writers were itching for Terra to say ** instead of witch.

one word: ...whoa.

Oh how nice!! It's always delighting to find a fic that's frustrated with Terra!! If you've read my Terra one-shot, you probably know I'm not fond of her.

But this was a very refreshing thing to read, I think. I hadn't read any "Terra" stories in awhile (seeing as most of them that include her 'coming back' usually end up on the moronic side) so this put me in a good mood. Good job!

i'm guessing this is what the song 'zombie' inspired? i loved this poem though! It was very well written, you rock my socks as always dear! you never stop amazing people
and i can't wait for the next chapter of my present! (1 of the best presents i've ever gotten might i add)
:)
I love you lariwen! may your writing amaze people for ever!

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That was freakin'/flippin awesome! I am not the biggest Terra fan but this was great. This, to me, sounded like how Raven would actually be. I really like how you did the poem, very very good. *Adds to Faves*

No need to apoligize, people can't wait for the other story. Though its nice to know that your going to update soon since I love that story.

-RedXStarRob

Pretty good but i would reccomed changing the last line in the first part to (you wanted to call me a traitor too) or something like that, but other then that its good thus far.

runUova99

Ps:read my story "the infantry" and review nicely i know it sucks, thanks.