Neh, Hotaru is good at not speaking.
Hotaru: ...?
Yes.
Hotaru:...
I know. Don't be sad, 'Taru!
Hotaru: ...!
Could have fooled me!
Hotaru: ...
I'm not stupid!
Shinrei: That's disturbing.
Well, he only says something smart when he doesn't speak. Rest of the time he's blah.
Hotaru:...!..., ...
*laughs* Oh yeah, he's says your fic is okay and he thinks your psychic.
Hotaru:...
And when he gets drunk he sometimes sings. He's a good singer. Keep writin'!

I love this!... Giant purple caterpillars?...I couldn't stop laughing. (I can just picture Hotaru trying to explain that!) Any way, this was great, I really hope you'll update soon!

Cuteness! I liked the Panda story the best! I can really picture Hotaru hugging a Panda...they just seem to match...good choice on the Panda~

I love this! Keep up the good work!

Aw! That's so sweet! *grins* 'Taru is so dumd it's cute.
Hotaru: Wha?
^-^ Much better than when he's being a homicidal maniac. That isn't cute at all. That's just wierd, ne?

I'll be honest...I'm not really sure how to review your story. Chapter one was strong,it established a good foundation and I was really looking forward to seeing where you might take it from there. Although I have to say I was a little dissapointed with chapter two. It was short and its not that it wasn't good, it just seemed to lack something.
To sum it up I really enjoy reading your story but I think the second chapter was too short and didn't really progress the story much. Please don't hate me...I am looking forward to another update!