Great story! I really like it, I am looking forward to reading more!

Woah. That was amazing, dark and a new look on Dormé.

BTW: Go Sabéwan!

That was so sweet in a twisted way but I am glad that Vader has found someone to love him.

mimi

OH...MY...GOD.
That is so disturbing. And brilliant. You just ruined my whole day ;-)

Pretty good to me, particularly if this isn't your normal take on the universe. I never even thought of how Dorme would feel about Anakin - turned - Vader. Kudos to you for thinking of it!

As for critique, Vader didn't really seem to be reacting to Dorme enough. I know that this is the whole "evil Sith" thing, but still, wouldn't he be a bit more emotional? After all, he's still not quite pure evil.

Very good Dorme though! I imagine she would feel very loyal still to Anakin, especially if she didn't know he "killed" Padme. But why doesn't she? Isn't that what Anakine believes?

But overall, I liked this little vigenette very much.

Holy sweet crap this is amazingly creepy and I could see it too!! *shivers* Wow I'm just blown away by this tale and so creeped out! *Is beyond pleased about Dormé dying* That just rocks my socks!