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i can't believe it just ENDED like that...
huh... i really must stop being surprised like that, but wow. i guess it all makes sense, but i was still caught unawares...
really awesome story, makes me think... (he might really die just like that.. i was sorta hoping for a heroic turn so that is prolly why i am so aghast...)

this is very different than any fan fic i've read but I did like it

That was confusing.

very interesting