 Queen.of.Tea 2006-08-10 . chapter 1The story's good; a little cliche (oh, it's catnip, Perrault's a cat, hur hur hur), but your writing style is solid and you have a good grip on the characters - they seemed pretty accurate, although I'm not the writer nor do I play her on TV. It wasn't overly sappy, I've seen much much worse. And you're very brave for writing for a webcomic fandom, since you can get Jossed* so easily.
If you really want reviews, I'd turn anon reviewing ON. I leave most of my reviews anonymously; I only log in when I really have to - saves on the flaming from silly Naruto fanlings who can't take a concrit :)
*Jossed - when your fanfic becomes invalid/AU because of events that occur later on in canon; e.g. Goku marrying Piccolo, or something |
 He Who Is Bound By Fate 2006-05-10 . chapter 1Heh...very nice. I always wondered how Puss in Boots would react to a stalk of catnip...
Honestly, I'm not a very big Perrault/November fan. I don't really do any pairings in 'No Rest For The Wicked'. But, that doesn't mean I don't enjoy these sort of stories. Sappy isn't necessarily bad, you know.
Entertaining one-shot. Good job! |