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| Kylyn 2008-06-02 ch 7,  | abuseI love them! Maybe you could do one about Sandstorm, Bluestar, Tigerstar, or Crowfeather. UPDATE! |
| lilly Moren 2008-05-14 ch 8, anon. | abusenice story about tawnypelt finally having kits of her own, it made me feel happy that she finally becomes a mom after the new warrior series. |
| Crescentclaw 2008-04-02 ch 6, | abuseOhh... Me likey. :) Please update soon! :) ~Crescentclaw |
| crystalstar 2008-02-28 ch 6, anon. | abuseGreat! |
| Rainingday32 2008-02-20 ch 6, | abusegood but needs more indirect descriptions |
| CinderDreams 2008-02-19 ch 6, | abuseaww that was cute. I like willowkit :) |
| Storm Midnight 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseI NEVER KNEW YOU LIKED WARRIORS! OMG, Warriors is one of my fav series, Awsome one shots, they are very deep and well written. I'm so sorry about Foxfire, she would have been a brave Warrior. I hope you continue writing soon! From, Silverstorm (that's my Warrior name) |
| TheLadyAthena 2007-11-12 ch 9, | abuseLike the story! |
| Spazz Union 2007-08-30 ch 6, | abuseMWHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA |
| Guitarprincess 2007-07-09 ch 5, | abuseI think you should do choice A because I would love to see him and midnight go at it and also choice D cause we know lionpaw's reaction but we dont know heatherpaw's |
| Cloverfot 2007-06-15 ch 5, anon. | abuseHm. Well, I think you should do Choice B because I've always been kind of crazy about Brambleclaw for some reason. Nice stories, by the way! |
| Spazz Union 2007-06-15 ch 5, | abuseE or A |
| Moonie889 2007-06-05 ch 5, anon. | abuseE would be very interesting. I also like C and D. But E would be my top. 1. E 2. C 3. D Great story by the way! I love it! |
| MewstarandFirefoot 2007-03-28 ch 4, | abuseI really like the concept of the shorts. I am an expirienced writer and Warriors fan and I say you are doing a good job. Though I say maybe you should write them a bit more in the format of the warriors books. I am currently writing a history of Tigerstar, and I have a theory of why he chose Brindleface to kill. ^.^ Brindleface was Darkstripe's sister, and Darkkit and Tigerkit at the time were good friends. Darkkit didn't like Brindlekit, and Tigerkit promised he'd kill her. |
| WildCroconaw 2007-01-16 ch 1, | abuseI relieze that I'm not the first author to do an author's note via a review to my own story but I am too lazy to repost the chapter so here it goes: Okay people. I relieze that when Brindleface was murdered, that Tigerclaw was Tigerstar then and that I made a few spelling errors, but that was because when I was writing this chapter, I didn't have the book and you can't expect me to remember all the names all the time. I also relize that Cloudtail is a bit out of character. Hope you enjoy it and please check out some of my other stories and review them after you've read them . Thanks -WildTotodile |