 pamela 2006-10-01 . chapter 1 Please updates soon, your fanfic is the best I ever read, sorry if I have grammatical mistakes but english is not my first language. There aren't many fanfic of csi in spanish, for this reason I have to read them in english.
well your fic is awesome please updates as soon as you can. |
 Soccer-Bitch 2006-10-01 . chapter 14awesome story so far. can't wait for more. |
 Shorty-Ace 2006-08-26 . chapter 1O... u hooked me at the summary! im so x cited to read this!
Ashley Sanderson |
 bauerfreak 2006-07-31 . chapter 14Hey - long updates are awesome!! I was so upset I had to wait for almost three weeks to read your update b/c I was somewhere with no internet access. I was so glad to see a nice long chapter when I got back. The wedding was a shocker, but not out of Greg's realm. haha! You're seriously killing me with anticipation. These two need to do it fast. Like, yeah. Now. Please. :) Great chapter!! |
 wraiths-angel 2006-07-16 . chapter 14this was a great chapter and Greg and Jen do need to sort things out and I wonder if Nick will get in trouble because of Hodges, really looking forward to the next chapter and hope it comes soon! |
 odeepblue 2006-07-15 . chapter 14oh come on! please some GSR!
pretty please, please !
i love this chapter by the way ;)
then again, i love the hole story, so it does not surprise me ! |
 TangledPencils 2006-07-15 . chapter 14Hey, as far as I'm concerned, you can do even LONGER updates, lol. Story going well, please update again soon. |
 rainingmist 2006-07-13 . chapter 13HEY! It took me a few days to read this fic, because I kept being called away from it, yet I was always eager to get back to see what happened next. I can't wait until the next chapter! I love this fic, and I believe you are doing a great job. Keep up the GREAT work!
~Rainingmist~ |
 wraiths-angel 2006-07-10 . chapter 13this was a great chapter and interested to see if Jen will say yes and if Nick will have a hangover later lol! |
 TangledPencils 2006-07-09 . chapter 13Not sure what I am, but I enjoyed this chapter, please continue. |
 odeepblue 2006-07-08 . chapter 13i LOVED, that little scene with grissom and sara, is a great entrance for GSR. which i love ;)
i loved this, please keep updating ;) |
 bauerfreak 2006-07-07 . chapter 13Hot damn!! Sorry - all I could think about during the non-sex scene was - how can he fit four fingers in there?? She must be loose!! haha...sorry, I'm sick. That scene was steamy and perfect, and the fact that she was on her period was a little creepy, but it was still hot...I tried to block that little fact out. Glad you used that little tidbit we talked about with ovulation and stuff!! ha!!
Poor them with Mac's injuries and stuff. It's okay for Anna to love him, because she's IN LOVE with Nick. I'm glad NIck seemed to understand in the end anyway. I can't wait when the time is all completely right, and they'll finally do the dirty when everything's PERFECT. Glad you didn't let it happen when they were both upset.
Can't wait to see what so shocking about Jen's answer. oh...
Awesome chapter!! Can't wait for more! |
 bauerfreak 2006-07-04 . chapter 12Dude, you're probably the best ever at SHEER TORTURE! This poor couple...jumping through all kinds of hoops, only to be stopped by a period?? My heart goes out to them. But actually, I think during an actual period is past the window where a woman can get pregnant, but don't quote me on that. So...they could be good to go! But, no - that wouldn't be perfect. And, by the next chapter, everything should be PERFECT, and I better be reading about hopping on the good foot and doing the bad thing!!
Anyways...that said...what I read was very good and steamy, and I'm glad they worked it out and glad that Greg was still sticking up for Anna. Please continue soon, and see above for demands. :) |
 wraiths-angel 2006-07-04 . chapter 12this was a great chapter, Yay for Anna and Nick getting back together and hope that Greg and Erin sort things out. Looking forward to the next chapter and will Nick ever be on the good side of his parents? |
 odeepblue 2006-07-04 . chapter 12hey i love this, but i was wondering, is there any space in this story for some gsr? |