Tessai creeps me out...Urahara creeps me out in a sort of laughable way and I would probably try to kill him, but Tessai makes me want to lock my doors.

Jimmy Buffet would make a good theme for Kisuke.

Women...

Weird relationship they have...almost like it's too close to really function.

Honk Shu cracked me up.

Read it, loved, will add more review later after I've gotten some sleep and you've had the chance to clear out your inbox.

This story made me feel angry and sad at the same time. I really don't know why.

This is very intriguing so far, and very well written. I'm glad you started this, because there are very few Urahara fics out there that are really worth reading. Although I'm hoping for some Urahara/Yoruichi love, since I've recently become obsesseed, and there are definitely too few fics out there w/them as a couple. It makes me sad :-(

Anyways, this was very entertaining to read, please update asap!

I love how you describe how Urahara grabs attention. I actually like ALL your descriptions. Some are more bland thtn others, but they are all just so.

I find it interesting that you make Tessai a member of the twelfth like some people speculate.

There are a few things not quite right; there should be some kind of spacer before Tessai's POV jumps in and 'Tessai knew them only be reputation' needs to be remedied.
However, that's all I can find at the moment.

Hey, loved the chapter. Really good. Love Urahara. Next chapter please!

wow. i hope you update this soon because i think this is an awesome fic.

it's really thoughtful and i like how you cover the characters really well. rather IC.

it's awesome to see a serious fic about urahara - i hope you finish it!

i'm looking forward to i!
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fascinating...do continue

This story's good (there just aren't enough stories about Urahara), you really should get more reviews for it! Keep it up (and update please) :) I like how you portrayed their friendship (hehe, even if that thing between Yoruichi and Ukitake threw me off a bit).

hey nice chapter...love how u make convers together...plz update sooner...and plz plz make it an uraharaxyoruichi fanfic... i like the way u put ukitake with yoruichi, but...plz yorouchi with urahara

Urahara with a crush on her? I would've never thought of that. Liked Yoruichi's response too. I need to start writing again, feelin' all inspired and such.