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Blue eyes6 2006-06-21 . chapter 4
That was fast. great chapter, but us that the end?
Blue eyes6 2006-06-21 . chapter 3
This is going to be hard. How are they going to make sure they vanquish the "right" Belthazor?
Great chapter, loved it.
myshadowspirit 2006-06-16 . chapter 4
"Thanks. Let's kill him," That made me laugh. Good old violence
FallenAngelFromTheSky 2006-06-04 . chapter 4
it's about time you updated it! so sad it ended though. did you study for the SS DBQ? I still need to and it's eight and Charmed is on, so i probably won't! hehehe...:):):)
myshadowspirit 2006-05-20 . chapter 3
I can't belive I didn't read this chapter before. I'm geting so confuse. I can't tall what I've read and what I haven't.
?Now I have to check every thing to see how many times I've reveiwed you
coles lady 2006-05-11 . chapter 3
Love it! wonderful!
coles lady 2006-05-11 . chapter 2
This is really good. thank you. I love it. more please! I WILL ALWAYS LOVE COLE!
FallenAngelFromTheSky 2006-05-10 . chapter 3
very good chapter! i finally read it! it isn't my new computer that i'm reviewing from, unfortuantely. anyway, update as soon as you can!
charmedbaby11 2006-05-07 . chapter 3
what will happen now??
myshadowspirit 2006-05-06 . chapter 2
You kinda say events happen but you don't discribe it with alot of detail.
myshadowspirit 2006-05-06 . chapter 1
Your getting better at descibeing things better and interducing charaters. I'm not confused on who is who.
FallenAngelFromTheSky 2006-04-26 . chapter 2
very good! update soon!
Blue eyes6 2006-04-26 . chapter 2
Poor young Piper, hopefully they find the REAL demon responsible for killing her family.
Blue eyes6 2006-04-26 . chapter 1
Good start but I'm a little confused. If Piper comes from an alternate reality, why doesn't the Piper from that time question why the A/Piper looks like her.

I can't wait till Cole sees his Alternate self.
charmedbaby11 2006-04-24 . chapter 2
what would happen
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