oh my...wow...i...cant speak or write right now...this was beautuful..so so beautiful...wow..

this style is just..breath-taking...just..oh my...

I love riku...it was so cute. ur descriptin and style was very unique and creative and i congratulate you on successfully accomplshing this }

This was a stuning piece of art...so descriptively captivaing (erm..if that makes sense..hehehe .)

just..yeah...this was filled to the brim with emotions..over whelming emtions...

i loved tihs! RawR! .

I don't know what to say... this is brilliant!

Amazing! I absolutely love it! Gave me the chills. nice work.

Wow, you just got 500 awesomeness points! That was so deep and um awesome!_

YAY, it's me, that was so good! well done you!

Sao: I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE STYLE OF THIS!

Anni: Wow, his thoughts work so much better like this, amazing idea.

Sao: I wanna give him a hug. Poor Riku.

Sao & Anni

Dude...

Dude.

DUDE.

DUDE!

This was beautiful to look at much less read!

God there was such flow and grace and-

Better than /poetry/

-_-

Yuppers.

But AW man! Jeez that was awesome, first it was bleak, then there was hope but then it was gone like "POOF!" but then it was back but it was all bittersweet. I love bittersweet.

*bliss*

that was confuzing at first cuz i didn't know if it was from sora or riku's POV but eventually i got it figured out...but you probably did that on purpose right?

you have inspired me to find beauty in the dictionary.

but really, it was angsty, is was complicated, it was very, very riku :D

It's odd...

Cuz it confuzed me... and yet drew me in at the same time...

I couldn't stop reading even though I had no idea what it was that I was reading...

0.0

It's like a piece of art AND a great fic!

)

Oh...I'm kind of speechless. I must say though, very, very artistic. And gorgeous to read! Dare I say bittersweet.

Gotta love the angst. And I really like the style you wrote it in. Too many definitions for me to look up... I admire you and you're ability to get the characters emotions through. As I've said before...a m a z i n g...

that was cool!

That was really good. I liked it. Is there going to be one with Riku. I want to know!