Oh, you're good. This is cute and I noticed, are they in SSJ4 form? Because the eye colors ALMOST threw me off guard. They are aren't they? And they have a child, how adorable! This was very well written. We've all awaited your return. What's up with the addition to the name? It's nice anyway.

What a great story! I love this pairing, and really nice touch going into detail about the Saiyans, I think it's nice to know they didn't just like fighting! Really captures the culture and emotions between the two saiyans and I especially liked the cute bit with the little chibi saiyans! Thanks, really enjoyed reading this!