That was unexpected for ChiChi to visit him, and very touching that she would want him to be happy with whoever he loved.

So glad Goku finally overcame his fears and they connected minds. Now he can truly understand Vegeta's feelings for him. Hopefully he will finalise their mating now.

Finally! I'm so happy! It's about time Goku got to sense Vegeta and now he knows how much the other man cares for him. I really liked the scene with Chi-Chi. I always think that dream sequences work well for the character to sort out feelings and thoughts that they are having. I look forward to reading the next chapter whenever you should post it.

I love it. . I want to read the rest

Phew, he was only sleeping. Loved the banter at the start of the chapter, it was funny and kinda sweet at times.

Aww, the anniversary meal was very romantic, Vegeta really tried, bless him, and Goku appreciated it.

I liked all the teasing in the lemon at the end, nice to see them so comfortable with each other, and I hope Goku completes the mating soon as they are really content now.

I really enjoy your straightforward narrative style that has enough description but not too much that would bog me down and interrupt the story flow. Your dialogue is also great, and I love the banter and the warmth between Vegeta and Kakkarot (Goku).

Amazingly good as always.

This is a very lemony chapter. I'm glad Goku is finally figuring out his issues about being bonded to Vegeta. I think anymore suspense, and Vegeta would have lost it. It was also quite amusing to think of Goku falling asleep in the middle of nowhere like that. It certainly scared Vegeta. Looking forward to the next update.

That's shocking news that Goku will die if he doesn't complete the bond, and will take Vegeta and the cub with him. Why didn't Picollo say something earlier as time is almost up! No wonder Vegeta gets so annoyed with him. Surely they have to tell Goku soon, better to be alive and still unsure of the bond than to be dead. I do believe Goku wants to complete it deep down inside.

Was very comforting for Goku to talk to his friends and family in his dreams. Must be Dende's doing as it seemed more real than dreams. Just what he needed to reassure him. The talk with the old woman helped too I feel.

Sad that Picollo can not feel other Nameks, but at least he got to experience love, even if he didn't have time to act on it. However, Gohan didn't seem to think his death was an obstacle when Goku told him. Will he be visiting Picollo's dreams?

You left it on another cliff-hanger! Why is Goku stretched out in the glade? Has he collapsed, asleep, or something more disasterous? I need to know!

Great chapter!

I hope Kakarott is relaxing in the sun and not dead. I also hope granny Esme's little talk encouraged him to realize what a gift he will have if he allows himself to finally tap into the love he feels deep down inside for Vegeta instead of pushing it away. It is scary to love somebody, but you can't really live unless you do. Well, whatever happens, I'm sure it will be juicy, angsty, and enjoyable to read. Looking forward to the next update!

No!! Evil cliffy! The story's great! I love it! Please update soon!

that last sentence of goku was a bit harse dont you think?
but anyway i really like the two chapters that you added, hope you updat soon again!

That was fantastic–The day when you posted this I was really, really needing a good fic update (more so than usual, anyway), and there was Patience 11. I’m glad you’re updating this fic again. Sorry I’m late with the reviews yet again–life has been hectic lately.

Aw, it was just the split-form technique. I was hoping Piccolo was, eh... something else. :D Maybe Vegeta's wrong! Piccolo did try to disagree with him. I was pretty proud of Veg the last chapter for handling himself so well (not getting angry, that is). And I feel for Goku, afraid to get close to anyone again because he’s tired of being hurt. He should know that Vegeta wouldn’t die so quickly or so easily as his human friends. Seeing multiple dreams of his death would be intimidating, though, and I’m wondering if it’s just a fear dream or a premonition.

Phew that was a close call! Poor Vegeta was so distraught, but I did love the scene of him wrapping himself around Goku and forcing him to live.

I get the sense that time is running out for Goku to return the bond and worry that if he doesn't it will mean the end of both of them. I hope his trip away will make him finally accept it, though Vegeta will almost worry himself to death when he's away from him.

Great Chapter!

I really love Piccolo and Vegeta's relationship in this story. They are both intelligent and cantankerous and they clearly have very deep feelings for Goku. This dynamic is a great part of the story. I am glad Goku didn't die, but I have no idea why he would decide to leave like that. He seems to be really trying to skirt the issue of finally bonding completely with Vegeta, and it kind of bothers me that he won't make that sort of commitment, especially since it always seemed to me like Vegeta would be the one fearful of commitment. Then again, he never left Bulma like Goku did with Chi-Chi on numerous occasions. Looking forward to the next chapter you cook up.