   Techno-Poet 2008-07-02 . chapter 1Oh my gosh...that was so beautiful! I can imagine Edward actually doing that in the books (though I hope and pray that he doesn't leave her, and that they live happily ever after). I cried when I read it the first time. Then I read it again, and cried more. It's such a well written, wonderful story! |
 jenniblu421 2008-06-09 . chapter 1that was very good and very sad... |
 -'cErVaNa'- 2008-03-03 . chapter 1so touching I almost cried...T_T |
 Sakiru Yume 2008-02-19 . chapter 1Oh my god. That was really sweet. Did he leave her in a book after Twilight? I haven't read anything past Twilight, so most of the "Twilight" fanfics don't make that much sense to me. |
 in love with vampires 2008-01-09 . chapter 1aw...it made me cry :| but it was great |
 BlackRoseThorne 2007-02-26 . chapter 1That was beautiful. I'm crying right now. Actually crying. Thankyou for writing something so wonderful. |
| Agony of a Loveless Eternity 2007-02-22 . chapter 1 That is terribly sad... But the thing is, Edward would do something like that. If I were Bella, I think I'd have died when he left me, especialy if he had left before. I loved it. It was so elegant. |
 Mentally Insane Fangirl 2006-12-13 . chapter 1D*! This is the first time I EVER cried, because of a fic! T_T Good job! |
 kyasurin15 2006-07-26 . chapter 1oh thats so sad im crying.. it's really good thought very nice and creative.though it's sad but good. ^_^ |
| forevermagik 2006-07-12 . chapter 1 *sniff* how sad... Good story though... |
| xxFreesiaxx 2006-04-30 . chapter 1 That was so well written! It was also depressing, I was crying by the end of it. Great job, I hope you write more fics for Twilight. |
| a.k.a ettie 2006-04-24 . chapter 1 that was really sad. 'They could never be more than what they were; dreams.' |
| black.n.blu 2006-04-24 . chapter 1 How dare you write something so completely heart wrenching, and yet so good at the same time?! I couldn't cry, but I had to go grab my book and remind myself that it didn't really happen! (Technically none of it really happened, but you know what I mean!) Wonderful writing, the story really did its job. |
| Tyrz 2006-04-24 . chapter 1 Oh my gawd... I cried so hard. I'm still crying. Okay I love this story and I hate it. I have always hated the idea of edward making bella go about a normal life because he feels hes damning her, but this really was view that felt like it completed all my thoughts and situations about twilight. Thanks so much, I hope you continue writing... ;) |
| twilightobsessor101 2006-04-23 . chapter 1 omg, this was so sad...i cried :_(! but, you are a very good writer and it was well written! good job! |
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