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iceland 2007-10-10 . chapter 1
it is a good story to read.
Sdarian 2007-09-25 . chapter 4
Wonder what Kenshin's reaction will be to the fact that his drug induced delusion was right? And I'm always fond of stomping on Pluto and the other outer senshi (excepting Hotaru). I hope that they do come into conflict with one another, but I doubt it will happen as the power level of those involved (namely two top of the line goddesses) would make it rather one-sided, and have massive amounts of collateral damage. Well, whatever. I enjoyed what you've written so far, and can only hope to see more in the future. Good luck!
Blackdex 2007-08-11 . chapter 4
Saw that comming. Ciao
Chinangel 2007-08-05 . chapter 4
Well...I certainly hope that this fic isn't dead. That would be a horrible shame. You have something wonderful and interesting going on here, please don't let it die! I know it's been a year since you updated but still...please continue this fic!
borg rabbit 2007-07-15 . chapter 4
Hey. Don't let this story die on the vine. I want to see more.
Thanks for the start.
Wes
ApocSM 2007-05-09 . chapter 4
WOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON!
Princess Asuna 2007-04-15 . chapter 4
nice story so far, but when will you update next, please dont tell me u have abandooned the story. will kuno (kenshin) meet up with ranma and nabiki?
0K0 2007-01-13 . chapter 4
wow great fic
mikebreslau 2006-09-26 . chapter 4
This is a very auspicious beginning. Too bad it's only partially complete. I'd like to see where it goes.

Thanks for writing.
MIke
Lord Nightfyre 2006-08-28 . chapter 4
I really like your story. Will anything grow between Kenshin(Kuno) and Ranma. Any plans for Shampoo. Don't keep me waiting for more.
Paver83 2006-07-14 . chapter 4
Neat story! Kuno actually being someone one can like is unusual, and you pulled it off. I wonder if Kenshin will have to do some smack down on the Kunos? I also wonder how you'll use him otherwise. I expect he, and other in the NWC will have to face the Senshi while the two new goddesses battle Fenrir and Loki.

Eagerly awaiting more! Thanks!
FairyQilan 2006-07-06 . chapter 4
Definitley a great story. Update soon, ne?
Silverscale 2006-07-01 . chapter 4
...Man I hate it when Ranma gets turned into a girl, doesn't feel right.
ranger5 2006-05-19 . chapter 4
Another fine chapter. The changes make it flow more evenly. As I said on Fukufics C&C it's gonna take time for Ranma to accept being a girl ... and even more to accept the possibility of loving a guy ... even one that is (usually) a girl.

Nabiki as Loki's counterpart was inspired... and the shapeshifting ability does allow for the possibility of kids eventually. (Of course being goddesses that's probably not actually necessary) After all Athena was born without a momma from Zeus's head ... the one on his shoulders you perverts(g) But it does eventually allow for Ranma to be accepting of what she is ... and that's important.

Can't wait to see more.
ranger5 2006-05-19 . chapter 3
Nicely done. Good character interaction which is a definate plus. Nodoka may have accepted this a bit quickly... but on the other hand she did love "Ranko" and your explanation as to her reasoning (ie wanting to know her "child") makes this work ... even if not the most original concept it is one that makes a lot of sense and reflects "reality" as it is in the Ranma universe.

Keep up the good work.
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