wow.. I was not expecting that schizo twist at the end! Great story! I feel sorry for the psycho... esp. since it's from his POV. I like your description of the murders- simple yet descriptive. (I almost skipped over his first "attack", though, b/c it was so short!) I think you really captured how a psychotic killer would think. Keep on writing!

This is great! I love this story. This is just perfect, I just don't know what to say. It's just, I like it, the whole thing.