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Katsumara 6/5/09 . chapter 1
Too good of a story here for real.
RedBlueGreen 7/6/08 . chapter 1
That is really, really good. I love it. The "lowered expectations" gag is the crown.

I think the pizza-eating plant is a reference to ... Rocky Horror?

Comic gold. Thanks.
Sonny Day 6/4/08 . chapter 1
Your works are diamonds in the coalface of the internet.

Everyone else's praise covers what I want to say, so I'll just mention the genius of the Drakken/Shego exchange.
BlueEyedBrigadier 11/21/07 . chapter 1
Oh...now THIS was just all kinds of hilariously brilliant! Though I thought Kim was carrying her infant child with her (instead of a pizza) cuz she couldn't find a sitter at such short notice;)
jiggermole 6/2/07 . chapter 1
interesting viewpoint. Not a bad light on what Kim might find as a viable part time job.
Sharksbean 1/28/07 . chapter 1
lol! great story though i'm thinking you need to give Ron's pizza restaraunt a name here would be my idea :the never be normal pizzaria: whatcha think? lol anyway just a thought and a funny story
CastaS 11/15/06 . chapter 1
great shot. i enjoyed it much.
Andrew Joshua Talon 9/27/06 . chapter 1
You know... I can so totally see this happening. It's a little scary, if hilarious.
RI100014 9/9/06 . chapter 1
Lol, your humor is quite refreashing. Were you inspired by delivery that night? Just gotta be in the mood i guess..

Till next time..adios.
BenRG 9/3/06 . chapter 1
Brilliant. An original work of genius that benefits from being completely in-character and totally believable. Let me emphasise that I could see this happening on the show. Well done Mr. Grey.

BenRG's Rating: 8/10
righteousindignation 9/1/06 . chapter 1
Wow. What can I say? You come up with short yet powerful (and hilarious) stories that just blow everyone away. Free pizzas and Dr. D? Yea, I can see that lol. Great work!
A Markov 8/11/06 . chapter 1
Always entertaining. Thanks for the smile.
Brother to Vorlons 6/2/06 . chapter 1
Very funny. A comical yet bizarrly logical extrapolation of the show's premise: Basic average girl, pizza delivery job, as done in that zany Kim Possible context. A good, if light, work.
spectre666 5/22/06 . chapter 1
I thought I reviewed this when I first read it, sorry. Very good and very imaginative. Although I would like to see how K/R do the plant thing. Great work.
MrDrP 4/26/06 . chapter 1
That was cute and clever.

You've got a talent for writing scenes that provoke vivid mental images: Kim doing her flip, then catching the package, and Drakken offering to pay with pennies quickly come to mind.
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