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xox-Teirrah-xox 2008-05-28 . chapter 1
fantabulous
:-)
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iyfanatic 2007-10-15 . chapter 5
Aw, this was a really cute story; I loved it. *Le sigh* I love happy endings! n.n 'Tis going on my favorites!
Moondrop Flower 2007-02-11 . chapter 5
I totally loved this:
"We need to talk to you about something," they began to explain.

"Look, if this is about you two being in love or whatever, save it."

"Megan!" both Josh and Drake said at the same time, astonished at the tone of her voice.

"I don't mean that, boobs," she said, trying to calm them down. "What I meant to say was that I already heard you talking to mom and dad."

"Oh," Josh said, then a look of confusion filled his face. "Wait, how did you hear?"

"I have my ways," she said with a wicked smile.

And this:
"Gross!" they heard a little voice say as Megan walked by.

"Megan," Josh explained to her "we already told you there is nothing wrong with-"

"I know that," she responded matter-of-factly "I was just saying it to you boobs in general."

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Great fic, orignal and well, I loved it. Fav!
Oasis Blackmore 2007-02-01 . chapter 1
Intriguing, entertaining, in-character, initial chapter . . . I like this story so far. Unfortunately, my eyes are beginning to burn from lack of sleep, so I must be off. I'll make sure to read the rest of this fic at a later date.

~ Oasis
Uke Love 2006-07-17 . chapter 5
Man that was awesome : )
Synclaire 2006-06-20 . chapter 1
This story is great! Make another story!
Midie 2006-05-19 . chapter 5
I just realized I never gave this a proper last review.

Very good. Like I said before, I don't normally enjoy slash. A few "D&J" that I've read have appeared to be a lot about the physical things they do...and while that can be good, more often than not, it doesn't look like conflict would show up anytime soon. I like to see a bit of them trying to figure it out and being a bit confused before diving into a relationship.

Good job.
Timiniminy 2006-05-06 . chapter 5
so..is this...the end...?
...damn it...
i staied up for this!?
...eh. it was awesome anyway. ^_^
i'll just hope for another chapter. that's wishful thinking for ya!
...
Keep up the good work!! (see the trend?) XD
Timiniminy 2006-05-06 . chapter 4
aww man i hate this!!
i finally, after a long time of procrastinating...
i finally find the very story i've been looking for!
AND ITS AWESOMELY WRITTEN!!
...now i have to sleep...stupid...body...-thud-
-mumbles in ..sleep?- keep..up...god...work...-snore-
glokmah 2006-05-04 . chapter 5
Finally it's letting me review the whole thing, yay! My favorite Drake & Josh story. I like how you ended it and I loved when Walter was all confused about who they were kissing haha. I can't wait for you to write more stuff.
Tea Demon 2006-05-03 . chapter 5
I read it over at LJ on DrakeXJosh and now here I just wanted to say it was awesome. Will you continue this? With people finding out and such?
AlisonLydon 2006-04-27 . chapter 5
It's over, Itzel?

Say it's not so. *LOL*

But it is so. What a bummer.

I enjoyed this story. I like how you ended with
the family intact but saved the predjudices for
the people they'd never see again once school was
over.

A very beautiful story.

I look forward to your next creation.
JanetBanana 2006-04-26 . chapter 4
OH MY GOD! WHOA! Sorry...had to spazz for a second. Yeah I LOVED it. Please continue. Very good!
Midie 2006-04-26 . chapter 4
I'm enjoying this. I don't normally enjoy slash so much because...well, the conflict never seems to be there and Mindy never seems to find out. Neither do the parents...and if someone's standing at the door...well, things are getting interesting. ;)
AlisonLydon 2006-04-26 . chapter 4
"You know, Josh," Drake replied "I really don't think that's gonna be a problem. You see, the whole reason I never wanted anyone else to know is because I was afraid that you'd find out. So now that you know, I don't really care what anyone else thinks."

Now that is supreme Drake Parker character growth!

So when are the folks and Megan going to find out? One thing is for certain, they're not going to be as accepting as Mindy was.

I'm loving this story. Update soon. :)
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