Very enjoyable to read...so sweet and romantic!

I loved ur story:) Awesomelly sweet

These two chapters were so romantic. Ash is no groupie. She IS his muse. You got it exactly right. I found the image of girls wearing Craig's T-shirt hilarious, but lucky Ash has her own flaming Craig-shirt to pull out when he's acting naughty. Awesome! The lyrics are beautiful, and very much in character. We sure like to make Ash cry, don't we? ;) lol.

I really like these. Craig and Ash both seem *very* in character, as does their relationship. I can't wait to see the next two parts, nice work. :)