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KisaiKagai 2008-09-02 . chapter 4
This was written by a 14 yr old.

ROFL..nice story. xD
Mitsuki Sakura Uchiha 2008-07-21 . chapter 4
... foolish indeed
Black-Blue Moonlight Neko 2008-07-07 . chapter 4
i...like it soo dont kill ur self the ending was funny though lol
cyvoria 2008-06-26 . chapter 4
♫♫OMFG B§IDE§ THE TYPO§ THAT WA§ FREAKING AW§OME!♫
♥i luved it♥ ☺3rd chapter was funny☺


(2 do the symbols if u dont know hold "alt" and press any number on the right side number panel thingy on ur keyboard. u can mix and match them 2 make cool new symbols like "9+8+6+7+5+3+4=♫)
Curious ely 2008-05-26 . chapter 3
@_@ Oh.My.God! That chapter was A-MAI-ZING

Ahem...I'm calm >.>
Sakuraangel1327 2008-05-13 . chapter 4
BWAHAHAHAHAHAH! love it. hilarious.
paperflower3 2008-05-11 . chapter 4
Interesting fic.
Could have been abit longer in some chapter.
But good non the less.
It would be awesome if you did a Neji/Tenten fic, or something.
Keep up the great work.

-paperflower3
stilldoll165 2008-04-02 . chapter 4
great story so far
krystalhatake 2008-03-03 . chapter 4
LOL!
krystalhatake 2008-03-03 . chapter 3
0.o
krystalhatake 2008-03-03 . chapter 2
LOL! Funny Shikamaru!
krystalhatake 2008-03-03 . chapter 1
LOL! Nice Itachi! AWESOME chappy!
crazilyinsanelady 2008-01-25 . chapter 4
OMG I ** LOVE that last line! How original!
gossip.girl.238 2008-01-17 . chapter 4
Ur fanfic is so GOOD!! One of the best! Make m0re of this!!
Mariegurl 2007-09-07 . chapter 4
Nice story. Vey original!
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