Geeze Dashi! I loved this story! Im glad I finally got to read a fic of yours! Youre very good my dear! ^w^

now it's the second time I read this fic, and I still think the same about it: It's beautyful.
The first time I had a little problem imagening the characters in their animal form... but today it was just wonderful to read it. More so after a day full of searching for any Richelieu story and not finding any that I hadn't read before.
Thanks.

Love this. I rediscover the DVD's of this cartoon and remembered how much I used to love it. I grew up with Milady as my role model lol. Your story rocked, would love you to write others!

Wow! You really had a surprise ending here! All this time I thought this would be one of those epic stories in which the main characters battle their obstacles and eventually fall in love. I must say I am impressed with the alternate way you decided to end this.

Poor Cardinal. The ending has such a melancholy feel to it, like the world has ended or something.

This just keeps getting better. The Cardinal's almost panicked thoughts in this chapter were well described. It almost made me feel like a trapped animal as well.

I can't help wondering what Milady's true motives are. You have dropped subtle hints that indicate that she has something in her mind. Whatever it is, it can't be good for the Cardinal.

There were a few bits in which your use of English confused me a little, but they were nothing major. The only part I'm going to bring up is this:

"Not that he would've hated, disgusted her after this morning."

If I'm correct, you want to say that the Cardinal doesn't hate or consider Milady disgusting. However, when you translate it into Finnish, it goes "Ei niin, että hän olisi vihannut, inhottanut häntä tämän aamun jälkeen". You're looking for the verb "inhota", not "inhottaa", right?

Ack, sorry about that bit. I have the tendency to get really nit-picky at times. I hope you don't mind.

Another piece of advice I have is that you should start accepting anonymous reviews. Right now it only lets one review if one is logged in. There are lots of people who don't have accounts or are too lazy to log in, so you might get more reviews if you accepted anonymous ones too.

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!

This chapter was even better than the previous. I like it how you're taking things slowly with the two characters instead of throwing them to bed at once. This kind of character development is exactly what makes this sort of stories fascinating.

You're handling Richelieu very well, I think. His actions and thoughts reflect his state of mind quite accurately.

One should read the summary before sending PMs, eh? I nearly had a heart attack when I realised this is based on the old cartoon, not the book! Richelieu was my favourite character as well.

I really like this. The story has your touch in it which makes it almost magical. Though my memories of the cartoon are faded (I can't remember who Milady is), this is a very enjoyable story indeed. The tension between the two characters is adorable.

Your English is good as well. I didn't notice any disturbing errors. I'll read the second chapter a little later.