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Kuo 2003-12-24 . chapter 2
What happens next? Does Ron make second etempt on the train? Does anyone suspect him?
rachel 2002-02-02 . chapter 1
Finish it!!!! U make it sound so good in the summary, and then nothing happens!!!!
rachel 2002-02-02 . chapter 1
Finish it!!!! U make it sound so good in the summary, and then nothing happens!!!!
i fling poozies {*!~STEF~!*} 2001-09-30 . chapter 2
oh, you a bad person! great story, i love 2 write but i don't have an email or a name in fanfiction.net so email when you want to, are you in RIOF?Ron's insanely Obsessed Fan's if ur not trust me you should be! anymoo, you spelled Dumblidor wrong, its Dumbledor. But everyone isn't a A+ student in spelling, I'm, good but i get things wrong. Plus TThe names are hard to spell anyway! But email me soon! If I email you frommy grandpa's house it'll say dad, cuz it's my grandpa's email, maxleeromeo something, the changed it but, i gotta go! byezues.
ps in riof my name is HyPeRNeSsIEs
dps Ropn is not a traitor, he's an angel, how could he kill or try to kill his bestest friend? Or try to help him from not coming, but maybe he's jealos cuz he gets more attention and maybe cuz harry just threatins him? I don't know its ur imagination, but mail me with ittybitiest hint peez?
Agent 216 2001-05-26 . chapter 1
It was an ok story but why is it rated pg-13 it should be more like g. Another thing- couldnt the letter be a bit more ....well.....threatining! I mean I would have still gone to school if that letter was sent to me! Heck I would go just to find out what this person had in store for me (that is if I got the letter)!
Potter Mad 2001-05-23 . chapter 1
More!!!!!!!!!
Ian 2001-05-22 . chapter 1
KEEP! WRITING! THE! STORY!
TJ 2001-05-22 . chapter 1
Oooooooh. Is it from Ron? Keep going!
KellyBelly 2001-05-21 . chapter 1
DUDE!!! Don't leave us hanging! Write more.
Lady Grizabella 2001-05-21 . chapter 1
Ooo..I wonder what could be up with Ron! I'm almost sure it's him who sent Harry the note, but why? Please continue!
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