AW...I thought this rather sweet.

Strangely enough, that last one nearly made me cry.

I really like these. Very short, very cool. I have so many drabbles... Maybe I should post them sometime,

Very sweet.. :)
Juliet's 'name' is nice..

This is very good..I liked that you write how Angeline's insanity affects to Juliet..

So sad..So Artemis..

Touching *sob*
I liked it.. :)

I laughed until I cried..Seriously, good joke ;)

Isn't it wonderful how the simplest of things can have such an effect. I loved that drabble. I have read them all so far and this one is definitely my favourite. My motto is 'less is more' so very very well done. The end line definitely tugged at my heartstrings...I think this one is going on my faves list, so I can read any more of your drables you may write.

~**Lizzie**~

Hm...(yes, I know i alreadfy said that!) It's...alright. A very clever idea, for sure. Me likey. Ok, I got the source of my Hmness. These last two seemed a bit simplistic in comparison to some of the earlier ones. In Surrogate, you messed a bit with form and some repitition to excellent effect which made it interesting. But that's just my opinion. I think every one of these is very well written either way. I do have some concrit:

"But war had come, with all its hardships and intense situations, and all those did to humans." The wording, "with all its hardships and intense situations, and all those did to humans," seems...awkward. I have no idea how to fix that, though. So don't look at me! (If you agree.)

"Something had happened." That line made me think that she didn't know what had happened,like whether he was alive or dead, which is contradictory. That's just what it evoked for me.

Btw, I liked the phrase, "As a tide of other people's happiness swept Holly towards the surface at last." Good job.

There's just something about your drabbles that makes them yours. It's like when you can taste something in the food but not exactly put your finger on it...
You create a world of your own where the character trive and live. The drabbles are so personal and yet a bit distant. All very beautifully written.
Good luck on your exams tomorrow. (I have my last one tomorrow. Hurrah!)

aww, how sad. very very good though. i must say, as you write more of these, they get better and better. your ability to show emotions so strongly in only 100 words is quite amazing. i can't wait to read more ^^

xoxox
wolf

Ah, that was wonderous indeed. Hope the exams are going well. *mutters to self* bloody terylene, how the frell do you expect me to know that by terylene you mean that polymer I DO know about, this is just the first and only time I have EVER heard it called terylene, including in the book THIS EXAM BOARD CLAIMS to have written! *screams* FROND I am going to MURDER frelling OCR! *sips a little coke and headbangs to a little muse* ok. ahem. sorry about that. really do hope exams going well. good luck for rest. Are you doing first year Uni exams now, or am I completely lost?

Was that A/H and Holly was thinking about Artemis who is...dead from the war?...scary thought..

I liked it.

/:/Brizo/:/

I love every single one of them! xD Continue continue! They're sweet and to the point.