It makes me so happy to see someone spell my name right...! Good story, good pace, so keep it going!
(go Madeleine!)
lyradaemon x
aka. Madeleine

Your fic is good. Please update soon.

Good chapter. Please update soon.

I noticed that you didn't get many reviews so I decided to write one. I think that this is awsome and that you must write more soon!

This is a very good story, and I like the idea. You only confused a few names, and you have a good descriptive style. Keep it up!

Nice beginning. I wonder what will happen next.