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| Kyuubi Fanatic 2008-06-12 ch 3,  | abuseA good ending I suppose. Thank you for it. ^_^ ~KF~ |
| Skendall 2008-05-05 ch 3, | abuseNice story! It's got a charm to it that I can't help but like. It's impressive that you've re-told events directly from the series, but managed to keep my attention all the same. Well done. |
| Demonkid 2008-04-30 ch 3, | abusesweet |
| Sungawd Ra 2008-04-30 ch 3, | abuseAwesome chapter, as always. It makes my morning to read great works such as yours. Also, AdrianTepes001, I think what he was trying to portray, is that Naruto only used minor amount of the demon chakra at the end of the fight, to break off the sand. Not for the previous feats (I thought the same thing until I re-read it.) |
| causeiambetta 2008-04-29 ch 3, | abuseThis is one of the most imaginative series, your takes is incredibly creative and insightful. i was so glad to see this get updated. not clear if you're done with this story from the Author's note but i hope you continue |
| AdrianTepes001 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseOne relatively minor but important flub (I think). Gaara says he knows demonic chakra but didn't sense any during the fight with Naruto. However, it's made abundantly clear in the anime and in the manga, that for that last boost, the one that rips off Naruto's headband and jacket, that is the chakra of the 9 tails. So maybe Gaara isn't familiar with the Kitsune's chakra enough to tell the difference between it and Naruto's. |
| TheWatcherandReader 2007-08-18 ch 2, | abuseThough you probably know better by now, 'gennin' is incorrect, as there are only two 'n's in the spelling of 'genin'. Also, it is 'Tajuu Kage Bunshin', not 'Taiju'. Keep on updating. |
| Hzleys87 2007-08-12 ch 2, | abuseThis was well written, and I love that you chose to make it through Temari's point of view. I think it's exactly what she would have thought. |
| the grey mage 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseman i totally forgot about how awesome this story was/is. and i state that you are an awesome writer. |
| Kyuubi Fanatic 2007-07-11 ch 2, | abuseWow, best one so far! XD Please continue, this is very interesting. You could even make a story out of this, told from the POV of Temari's journal. Pairings included ~_^ Or not,...but I'm certaintly looking forward to the Omake you mentioned. :D Good job and I hope to read more from you soon! ~KF~ |
| causeiambetta 2007-02-07 ch 2, | abuseI wish i could find criticism but this really was a great piece of work. Everything worked and the putting of Naruto using only his own chakra was a great touch. The fact is most of konoha still thinks Sasuke saved them... |
| causeiambetta 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely great! very inspired. |
| The-Eighth-Sin 2006-11-08 ch 2, | abuseyou are a good author. I also love this pairing even though it isn't really a pairing. |
| darkcarnage 2006-10-10 ch 2, | abuseGood story, I hope you write more. |
| Demonic Dragon Knight 2006-09-30 ch 2, | abuseI like this it is cute I do hope your planning on updating it someday I do like how you have portrayed everything through Temari it is a diffrent perspective everybody is used to reading the Naruto/Temari fics through Naruto's eyes but this is a very welcome change |