I Like it a lot! Please update Even In Death!

what a great chapter! as for sakura...sasuke should feel some of the darkness inside her and see it in her eyes so he challenges her to a fight and asks her what she plans to do now that she has come back. she could plan on becoming an Anbu captin and she starts to withdraw farther after her failure to get hinata back into her clan as the leader, and hinata and sasuke tag team to get her back...but if i had more time i could probably come up with something better...i hope that sparked a bit of creativeness atleast...

-Akumu

Great chapter! I never thought of something like that. That's an original idea about Hinata. I hope to see more of Sakura in the next chapter, she was lacking in this chapter.

Awesome chapter! I hope the Hyuuga clan dies. And I can't wait for Hinata to kill Hanabi. She better kill Hanabi. I hate Hanabi.

Only one thing I really want to point out is the switching point of views. In one sentence, you'll have a narrator talking (so it'll be in third person) but in the next sentence, you'll have Hinata narrating in her point of view. It's sort of confusing and kind of annoying. I just thought I'd point that out for you :D (Just as an example, here:

This also left time to pursue Naruto, but her heart wasn’t in it anymore. Sure, she desired to be with the blonde fool, but she just felt hollow and dank. She felt as if they had won, who was she kidding they did win. She saw their smirks as they saw her leave the estate, but on the positive note. The rumor of there being conflict within the main branch was music to my ears.

Apparently, my leaving is a black mark of shame upon the house, and there are the ones who have discovered I’m in the bingo book. They want to clam that the fighter came form their, oh so noble house. Yet, there are the ones who were only too glad to be rid of me. Yet between all that she hadn’t heard a peep form daddy dearest, not that she expected it.

You have, "She saw their smirks as they saw her leave the estate" and then in the next paragraph, you have, "Apparently, my leaving is a black mark of shame..." )

Okay, well, please update soon! I absolutely love this story.

Whoa, whoa, whoa, what are they gonna do?!

wow please update soon

i liked it...update soon

Damn! Hanabi's a **! Kill her off. I think the pairings should be SasuSaku and NaruHina.

BASTARDS!

-Akumu

oh...! you should've made Hinata jump up to the stage and threaten to kill the * Hanabi! >.< I can't wait for the next chapter! This is so awesome!

this is really good. it's something different from what everyone else does and it' really interesting. please update.

that was awesome...update soon

that was sick. amazing job.

I love your story. You've got me hooked.

OH HECK NO!! THEY GAVE THE TITLE TO THAT BRAT?!?!

Good grief, I'm gonna come through this computer screen and kill Hanabi! I HATE her! I hope you kill her off. I'm begging. Pleading. On my knees begging! Please, please, please kill Hanabi!

Please?


Well, anyways, wonderful chapter! I love this story and can't wait for the next fiery chapter where hopefully Sakura and Hinata will kill the Hyuuga's!! MUHAHAHA! Update soon ^.^