Aww! Great story!! Poor Doctor having to kill the Rose clone! Interesting plot!

That was just a wonderful story. It was so well done in every aspect. The writing was fantastic, the characterization was great, the plot was wonderful, the twists were exciting... It had fabulous suspense and had me guessing all the way. It was great how the Doctor saved the day and the ending in the TARDIS was satisfactory and sweet. I loved every minute of this. Thank you for writing it.

Wow - this is so crazy. This is great suspense and I absolutely love the way you've done Rose's mind. The strange thing pulling her back home - her thought processes sinking into one thought, leaving out instinct and rationality, the way she feels... Just fantastic! The Doctor's point of view is good too, although I wouldn't think he would think she was just heading back to the TARDIS without him and her shoes, but then she wouldn't tell him about the stomach thing, so he wouldn't have all the pieces of the puzzle. The new development with the men is a fantastic twist - I was having trouble understanding how they fit in, and now this is great! I also really liked it when she heard the Doctor calling her name, but she couldn't register that it was behind her. I just love this!

Wow, this is a really interesting development! This is such a cool idea for a story - it's very unique. Again, the writing is quite good, and the characterization is great. I just love this!

You have great cliffhangers. This is progressing nicely - it's got just the right level of creepy and realism; I was totally nervous when the Doctor was going along down the shaft and I'm still concerned about it. The writing is great and the characterization is very well done.

Ooh - great cliffhanger! This is an interesting beginning and this story looks to have really good potential. I'm curious about why the miners left so quickly and what the air has to do with it. It's cool the way you incorporated Rose's problem hearing to add to the plot, and the characterization is good. I'm enjoying this.

Lovely. Looking forward to more of your work. Any chance of some doctor whumping next?

That was a fun story! I liked that you kept it interesting and didn't drag it on forever. The cloning plant freaked me out a little but that was due to good writing. Thanks for sharing!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one! It read exactly like a TV episode, for one thing. You gauged everything -- timing, arrangement of plot, etc. -- perfectly so that the format felt familiar to me. The writing flowed easily and you kept the characters in character (a welcome change in the morass of Doctor/Rose pairings, I assure you) more or less flawlessly. I grew as fond of the 9th in your fic as I am of the 9th in the official series because you captured him so well. Plus he was adorable, giving Rose his clothes like that, and being a gentleman besides! x3 Excellent work!

This is a way neat concept.

What a great fic! It was truely terrific fun and quite engrossing to read. Well done.

Classy - if not slightly scary - fic, lol.
Jess x :-D

hmm... interesting ending and slightly suggestive to be sure.

holy... well, that is certainly interesting. what the hell is up with rose? what did the plant thing do to her?

ok... interesting, but i am so lost. what happened to her? did the plant do something?