Well done!

I re-read the earlier story after reading this one. A different context - Webb vice Mattie - but the same basic theme. I think it's fairly in character for both of Harm and Mac. Overall, the emotions read "true." Janlaw (1/2 of McRose).

I loved it! It was nice to see the vulnerable side of Harm for once. I hope you consider adding to this.

Love,

Lynn
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I like your story. I hope you write new ones. Have a great day!

Great story:) I think it has good potential. I always felt sympathy for Harm in Season 9. True, he could've fought for Mac, but she gave him the cold shoulder by running off with Webb. I never knew what the writers were thinking when they came up with that storyline. I've read several stories of other fanfiction writers who could've done a lot better than them. Continue the story. It's great!

Okay i admit it, when this story popped up I was like oh great another fluffy thing...but i was so wrong

THIS IS AMAZING! I'm so sorry it soo long to read it! I really like your style and your portrayl of Harm as weak which we don't see much. I do hope you consider more! Update soon!

Yeah...I have some time, so I'll review.
I liked your story, especially the way you descibe them mending their relationship, just step by step.

Keep on writing!

Really enjoyed this and was so glad Mac was there for Harm :)

that was great. i hope there will be more stories from you.?

great story.

Finally, someone seeing things from poor Harm's point of view! Can we have more please!

*grin*
See, I'm not the only one who has a sequel on the brain. Seriously though, great job!

Very sweet. Will there be another chapter to this story?