I cried and smiled and sighed in relief. This was terrific. It is going into my favorites.

I love this, it's very well-written, you have a great imagination,

Selene

Very good. Quite possibly the best one shot I've read. Of course, I have to request more. Might you continue this fic? ;)

Oh I do hope you update soon. I have been searching for wonderful stories like these, I want V back!! and I am so glad that he is in your fanfiction, I can't wait for more

*sobs of joy*

I like that she sits down to watch Wuthering Heights - it definitely emphasizes the angst between her and V throughout the story. I love that novel.

I have a suggestion, though: Go back and read it aloud, and slowly. This will help you edit for some of the grammar slip-ups and inconsistencies with tense (past/present). Then run it through spellcheck in Word (or equivalent). And yes, it's a pain, but read over it again.

This way we can more enjoy the story without getting distracted by the slip-ups here and there. :)