so it was truly a test of character.

what was the correct answer, madame ko? life, or death?,
brittney

This is one of my favourite fics. It's really good!! :D Can't see any typos either and didn't notice anything wrong with it. Well done, great writing!! :D

All during that, I was going "What the hey? that doesn't seem quite like Madam Ko..." So I really liked the end. I never even guessed there would be no bullets in the gun...:D I really like it!
Lon

Hey, mozzie. :) Good job. I really liked it!! It was very interesting, and it kept me wanting to read more. Have you read refloc's Flame Of The Gods? If you read that one, and then this one, it makes a lot of sense. :) Well, I really enjoyed it! thanks!

~welovechocolate~

I cannot believe that you have not gotten more reviews. This is a wonderfully written story that captures Butler's trainning in a very unique way. Good job with this!

I like it-I havn't read another from this perspective before in AF fandom. The characterisation of Butler is exactly what I imagined him to be...except, perhaps too like his 35 (40?) year old self?
Madam Ko was excellent though...tried once to write her. Failed miserably.

Bravo!

Ooh, the review box has spellcheck. [/!]

Now back to your fic.

Cool! This is quite the original take on Butler's training. Who'd have thought Madame Ko was Mean To Butler? (Probably everyone but me.) Yay for moral!Butler!

*makes up for generic!review by having lots of CC in the form of typos*

"After a short time, Madame Ko appeared to notice he look of confusion" - "notice THE look".

" 'Forgive me, Madame Ko, but may ask the name of your acquaintance?' " - "may I ask"?

" 'He is in outcast, a criminal,' " - "AN outcast"?

" 'In fact,' she went on, 'it is part of the reason we come to Japan – no one in Russia would be willing to provide us with one' " - missing a period at end.

Big Brother loves this fic,
FH

ohh, this was lovely. very butlerish, merci beaucoup ;)