A wonderful story to begin with. Uhmm, I think its perfect in its own way, with all the drama, romance, angst and the way you described life's ups and downs well.


Matt and Tai's relationship is somewhat sweet, a touch of semi-realism and sappiness But Its not a big deal. Also, the characterizations of the different characters involved is also impressive, a whiny (no offense) and confused Matt and a confident Tai is a well-matched couple. Though I hate it when he always complains about his parents, but I think its a good thing since its what brought them close together.


Tai's genuine concern for Matt is pictured well. Though I think it's hard to find someone like that today, which beat the realism of this fic. The overall atmosphere of the fic is rather pleasing. Light, romantic, a bit of angst and some 'hot' action. A well-balanced fic for a bunch of people who needed an inspiration to go on with their lives. That's how I would summarize this one.


Though there are some things that are at faults in the story that might create some confusion, like, did Matt's parents interfered with their relationship or not? But I think it's not such a bad thing. A story isn't meant to answer all the question.


As for the pairings, I really don't like Ken,so I felt a little bad for Takeru. Maybe you could have at least made it a three-some? (ha, that would be kinky)


Oh, and I almost forget about your language. You can speak french, and japanese! I think thats a good thing for a talented author like you.


One thing that irritates me is that the bastardized whatever you call it. I read a lot of fanfictions and this is the first time I encountered one. It's kind of annoying but I am guessing they are just lyrics to a song, so I think it wont bother me much as it did in the first chapter.


The storyline is original and unique too. Not the average high school fic, and it has a touch of realism into it, that shows you understand how the world really works and what kind of problems reside in our pitiful little planet.


Well, I HAVE MORE TO say but those are one of the most important points I want to stress. Have a fun day and maybe you can think of a sequel for this? That would be wonderful

Awesome story!! *squeals* It was great!

good story

This was one of the best Taitos I've ever read. I love reading your thoughts and opinions on life and the world in general. Not boring in the least. Plus, the fluffy and angsty Taito was written wonderfully. I read the nFiction version. Loved it!

oh this is pretty good

A fantastic story i was completely hooked! am now reading the unbastarsised (eh? having a moment) version from ur site. this had everything a good story should have, emotion, tension and some damn good yaoi moments hehe. keep writing
badger-chan

I love love LOVE this fic, and I am so very glad that it is finally finished. I was startying to wonder if it ever would be.

I'd so vote for yama!

kawai! ijou idai!wa igyou desu!!

TT did it have to end? I'm gonna draw a taito picture for this now. or one with both of them playing their strings. hm I

Wow, I can't believe I forgot to review here.. Finished reading it a few months ago. Took one whole day. x-x;... It was so cute. >__< I stil love it. Great work!

Wow, very cool story...
Anyways, I love your story!

Gah! I *still* can't believe that I never finished reading this! Ah...but that's okay, because I finished reading it now! ^-~ And I actually started it from the beginning and read it all the way through-and it made the ending to my horrible day that I had today *so* much better then what I thought that it was going to be! I seriously enjoyed this...now you've put me in the mood to go and work on some of my own fics that need some serious updating, neh? ^-~ And I totally liked how you managed to keep everyone in character...nicely well done! ^-^

Woah...this is such a good story! And i learned a lot more japanese from it!! I really hope you keep writing because your amazing!! Taito is my definite favorite match!! XDD

Gomen, But I'm gonna have to give you another review for the story.
It was so kawaii, right at the end. Kinda sad too. It was a wicked story and now I shall sit patiently waiting for the next fanfic, be it Takouji, Taimato or other (but please no Sorato ^_^')
Luved your stories, can't wait for you next Taimato (though I can't say no to a Takouji XD)
Please write your next story soon. Dozo!

Ja ne!

Kendosakuyamon

Sadame no Kusari o tachikiri