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| Lucifer's Seraphim 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely fascinating. A very detailed and downright GOOD examination of the aura of dark power and splendour that surrounds the great General Sephiroth. I notice especially the repetition of the adjective 'cold', which I take in this sense to mean not only a coldness of demeanour, but an actual *physical* coldness (for recall, he says "So cold. But I am ever by your side."). Hm. Interesting. |
| end the deceit 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseGood! Update |