I've just stumbled upon this fic. I must say, it's one of my favorites I've ever read. (And I've read a lot.) It's so simple, yet. The formatting, yes. It kind of makes the whole thing amazing. Well, anyway, great job. :]

Beautiful

okay,love,love,love this.short but sweet.poetic.fantastic.

Ahahaha this is SO FREAKING COOL! I ADORE the way you write! I luv it.

Great job, hun.

One of my favorites. Incredible Talented you made another wonderful story . Palex is the best.
Who needs a man when you've got a woman?
My thought as well.

Now this was fantastic. Gorgeous, and kind of funny... excellent.

That was just amazing. Very powerful and evocative. You said so much in so few words. Excellent work.

No one reviewed this? Are you KIDDING me? This is beautiful. It's a poem and a story all rolled into one.
You did a beautiful job, I hope you realize that.