that was adorable!

I really really liked that one-it was so cute that Ed just went back to sleep!!

e! cuteness!

aw so cute! yay for making out in extreme heat! one of life's simple joys...

-drol-

Even if only 8 then what? I still love it!

Heheh. I liked it.

Very nice! I like it a lot! Heehee! I know this sounds awful, but could you make them do something... "more?" heehee! I really am awful! Haha! I think I've read some of your others... I put you on my "author alert list"... but yeah, anyway, I really like your stories! More please! I love RoyxEd... it's probably my fav guyxguy pairing - it even tops Gravitation! haha! Keep it up! Can't wait to read more from you! :)

it was realy good espeshaly the middel

heh! that was sweet! XD hhahaha loved it =D

So cute! how adorable/ Roy actually is kind of like a chocolate covered marshmellow - hard and 'bastard-y' on the outside, and sweet through and through- just... fluffier in the middle. :x I'm am on my way 2 read ur otha stories, so catch my other review there!

Yes, I hated humid, but after reading this I felt like I love it now :D
Good job!

that wasn't pointless at all^^.i think i might print it out so my friend could read she's a big yaio(sp?) fan

That was cute! LOL Very nice.
^_~
CDW

Hey hon, this was really good. I've read a lot of your work over time and must say that (even with the few spelling/grammatical errors here and there) you are definitely improving in your writing. ^_^ This one-shot was wonderfully sexy and well-written (the combo of which just melts my butter xDD) and I hope that you write more RoyEdness very soon. Ta!

-Lina