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JTSplash 2008-09-03 . chapter 12
I read this offlin e, so couldn't comment straight away. I loved it, It was brilliantly written, loved the way you've written from the stalkers perspective as well. I look forward to reading any other pieces you've written:)
faketreefinger 2007-07-15 . chapter 12
I just read this all the way through and apparently... you like reviews, so I thought leave one. This story was really good. Probably the most realistic Sara/kidnap story I have yet to read. You really have the characters down. Grissom is hard to write in stories like this because we've never seen him get emotional and we don't really know how he would react to working Sara's crime scene. I guess we'll find out for sure in September. You really made him believable, though. Everything was well balanced. Awesome job. *runs off to read more of your fics*
lola laflaunda 2006-11-25 . chapter 12
YAY! I loved the ending chapter! It was great!
glowing-ice 2006-10-20 . chapter 12
I loved reading this fic so much! Of course, it took me FOREVER to read it, but still. I'm so glad that for onces, Gris and Sara aren't out of character in a GSR romance fic. Sometimes, people turn them into SUCH dramatic people ("I'm oh-so-sad that Sara is flirting with Nick and Greg... Tragedy... sorrow... whining... ICK). You're also such a talented writer. As soon as I read the first chapter, I was determined to finish the fic tonight. Or today, since it's like one in the morning, lol.

I'm sorry about not reviewing for all the other chapters. I just wanted to get done quickly and not get left in suspense! GACK. I'm a bad person. I'm sorry. Speaking of which, you should do a sequel. That would blow my mind and I'd definitely read it. :) Great job on every aspect of writing this wonderful story, and I hope to read more of your fics in the future. ^_^
Whimper 2006-10-03 . chapter 1
engrossing, gripping, and heart-melting.
Temerah 2006-10-02 . chapter 12
(Sorry for my awfull english-)
I understand that you're a fan about reviews... It's my first one for your fic but I rather wait for a story to be completed before read it; I'm sorry. Anyway, here we go!
In my opinion you're really a very good author; my only problem being that I found our little CSI not very good to find Sara... She's been abducted by the guy in direct relation with her last case and they didn't make the relation? Plus, they didn't even watch the videos of the lot of the lab first thing ? A little weird...

Still, expect for this tiny little aspect, I absolutly loved this fic ! Why?
Because -and it's an important thing believe me- it's a long one: the characters, theirs feelings and the descriptions of any kind are much more elaborated, consequently same thing for the suspense and the intensity of writing.(your wonderful descriptions scared me from time to time, I can assure you).
Because your MO (lol) of writing strengthen again and again this suspense: you know, when once it's Sara's POV, once it's Nick's or Grissom's...etc. A very famous trick but you used it quite greatfully.
Oh, and because it's even funny : "Hodges pushed his way to the front and buried his face in her shoulder. "I knew you'd come back." " I love that line. LOLL.
And of course, because it's ship ! lol.

I wanted to tell you one billion of things but my english isn't that good, so I can't... :o(

Suffice to say that I hope you'll write many many fics ! Great great job and thanks.

Bye !
Hamlets-pirate 2006-09-30 . chapter 12
good job. nice story. no time for a long rambling review now.
anneruhland 2006-09-30 . chapter 12
It might have taken awhile but it was worth the wait. This chapter nicely ties up the lose ends and Grissom's speech at the end of the chapter is great. I loved Sara's response also.
the line which has Sara saying to Greg to use his inside voice is just too funny. Thanks for a good story. anne
CSIFan2005 2006-09-30 . chapter 12
Really enjoyed your story. It had just the right amount of suspense, angst, and drama to make you feel for everyone. You even made the bad guy, sad enough that I felt a little sorry for him. But not nearly as bad as I felt for Sara and the team.

Also, at the end, the I love you did not seemed forced or anything. Plus I enjoyed that you had Sara continue to call him Grissom even after the I love yous. Because even in the new season we have yet to hear Sara call Grissom anything.

Best of luck with any new stories. Hope you continue them.
Myralee 2006-09-29 . chapter 12
Yay! I was wondering when you'd update this.
But, eh, no accusations or anything, it's certainly understandable; I haven't updated my own story in quite a while.

I really, REALLY, so completely and totally LOVED the ending.
I myself am TERRIBLE when it comes to finishing a story, so serious kudos there :3

The GSR is so sweet and believable all throughout the chapter.

Loved it!
Really!

...
I can't think of any more to say...heh, I just hope that what I've written can correctly convey how much I appreciate your writing.

So keep writing!

Love and peace,

Myralee
Chione of the Nile 2006-09-29 . chapter 12
That was really awsome, I read it all in one sitting! You do relice that this requires a sequel don't you?
Chione
odeepblue 2006-09-29 . chapter 12
loved it! lets see whats next! how about a sequel?

beautiful ending, amazing story!
CSIfan3 2006-09-29 . chapter 12
Great Story!
Loved it so much!
Awsome job!
jtbwriter 2006-09-29 . chapter 12
Thank you.

That was a great resolution-and Sara's starting to heal was so natural and believable. The humor touches and the way Gris and she gave their feelings to each other-just right! Thanks for a very tough but satisfying ride!
GSRGeeklover 2006-08-20 . chapter 11
I can't wait to the last chapter.. :D please update it soon.. :D pretty please?
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