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| sugarcrazedangel 2007-01-21 ch 5, | abusehey, this is an exceptionaly good story... will you ever think of finishing it? |
| DefinatelyNotMe 2006-07-11 ch 3, | abuseOh Lani. I love that you're writing a V fic. I also love that you've read the novelization- I really enjoyed it too. And I really enjoy this fic! You said Valerie's words almost make you cry every time- and they definately made me cry this time as well. You really are so talented and I have always and will always admire you. And keep reading. -Krys |
| big fan!!!! 2006-05-23 ch 3, anon. | abuseNow that was a chapter worthy of the film, if they did make a prequel to V they should put this in has a scene. |
| Rouen French 2006-05-01 ch 5, | abuseThis is fantastic, although I'm sure I'm not the first person to have told you that. One small point to make: in the Graphic Novel, Valerie was the woman in Room Four; that is, Room IV. In this chapter, she's called "VI," which is Six. I don't know if that was deliberate or not, just wanted to point it out. Keep up the wonderful job! |
| Monica 2006-04-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseWow. Wow. Wow. The part with V and he realizing who he is was written very well, and my favorite part of this chapter. The line about hoe Valerie's eyes were open, was too, very fitting. I am so running out of ways to say how good this is LOL Hence the short review. I am sorry. But all I can say right now is please update soon! |
| Dragolover1 2006-04-30 ch 5, | abuseYour fic is absolutely beautiful. In a dark, angsty, and brooding way. I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter. Update as soon as you can please. V IS ** HOT! |
| Shann 2006-04-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseAnother excellent chapter! I'm glad you included not only Valerie, but as I read it, an implication that she had heard V's declaration before she died. I like the idea that she might've had a little peace in the end and that maybe V had unknowingly given her some comfort in return for what she gave him. |
| Monica 2006-04-30 ch 4, anon. | abuse(God, sorry this took so long, FF was having a problem with reviews since I I read chap4 when you posted it xD) I LOVED this chapter. It's nice to see some of the GN brought back into a fic, even though I am a movie person myself, I did like learning more about V/Dana in the GN about how he worked with the flowers, etc. Very well done chapter indeed, and I love the way you described V. Like I always say, when you can picture in your mind what you are reading, you know the author did a good job writing it and that you did. I also liked the reference to how both V and Dana are wearing "masks". I'm with you V, in the sense that when she asked him if she could take some of his blood he was like "wtf, you never asked before" I thought that was a good line. Anyway...all in all, again, a very good chapter, very interesting and informative your fic is, yes indeed! More please! |
| theshadowcat 2006-04-30 ch 5, | abuseAHA! At last I can review your wonderful story. I'm really enjoying it so far, but I have one little quibble. The doctor's first name is Diana, not Dana. And while the bodies would eventually be covered with dirt, they were throwing lime (the mineral, not the fruit) on the bodies to make them decompose faster. At any rate, please update soon. |
| SomethingWeird 2006-04-30 ch 5, | abuseWow. I am really enjoying this so far! Brilliant writing and a great insight into V's 'life' in larkhill. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter! |
| Pumpkinator 2006-04-30 ch 4, | abuseI feel like you've taken a lot of Comic!V and put it into this chapter (which is a great thing). We don't know much about how he acted towards Dr. Surridge, but we can assume he had her wrapped around his finger because of her facination for him. I think this is a great start to viewing their relationship. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Shann 2006-04-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis is an excellent story. I just started reading it now so forgive me for not responding sooner. I absolutely love Valerie's story and it makes me come close to tears everytime I read it or hear it. If you could give us some glimpse of her, that could be so powerful. One question though, what was it about a woman's nails raking down his back? I wasn't sure if it was some romantic memory but given the comparison to torture I wasn't sure if that was another torture he was remembering...do we hear any more of his past life? |
| Monica 2006-04-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseYet again, a very good addition to the story. I liked how you put Valerie's letter into it. I , personally, like the movie version better, but, thats just me lol. Anyway. I love how this is all coming together. Thanks for posting it ^_^ |
| Pumpkinator 2006-04-26 ch 3, | abuseAh, yes, and V begins to emerge *evil grin* I think you did right by doing the whole letter, because we get to see what he thinks as he reads it. And it's a beautiful piece of writing, I'm always happy to read it again. Again I'm struck by how much Evey's imprisonment was modeled strictly after V's. Very fortuitous. Please don't get discouraged, your writing's beautiful and I'm eagerly looking forward to reading more of it. KUTGW! |
| firstmorningdew 2006-04-26 ch 3, | abusethose lines of Valerie are always worth to read:) they are written as if she lived all of the things.. so sad.. |